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The Peppermint Man

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by Anonymous

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by Tathagata04/22/05

what

a great piece!

I get Tim Burton visuals, and I read Poe and about a thousand other influences.
I love this:

The peppermint man
with the roll-up face
and moon rock eyes
and hair of lace

This belongs somewhere that lots of people can see it.

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by Wanton Vixxxen04/22/05

WOW!!!

"The Peppermint Man" that you have created, {with a very few age sensitive word changes}, could be the next Grimm -like tale I read to My grandchildren on their next visit. You have a very unique talent for this field of writing and I, for one, sincerely hope you continue in it. An excellent write - probably My favorite of the day.

Vixxx

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by Bridget6904/23/05

Interesting.

A wonderful storyteller's weaving of what could be a sinister bedtime fable.

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by WickedEve04/23/05

This is really good.

:)

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