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My Wife at the Company Beach Party

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by Anonymous

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by wowsex08/08/12

would love to see

a sequel to this amazing story

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by rixels08/29/12

How many of the guys that read this story would put up with Annie?

Is this kind of story supposed to be funny? Do most of the readers yearn for their high schools days laughing and cheering while some geek gets bullied? I don't get it and I don't think it is erotic. There certainly isn't going to be a happy ending.

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by Anonymous09/26/12

would have left her there and divorced her

She is a slut and i wouldnt stay with one like that. Once she cheated then the guy that fucked her is hers not me.

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by Lickideesplit10/11/12

Camels and pro wrestling refs

There is a fable about a camel who doesn't like being out in the cold and the sand-storms. He asks his Bedouin master if he can just stick his nose in the tent to protect it. Before long, the whole camel is in the tent. Sweetie starts out by sticking her camel-toe in the hot-tub! She finishes with enough extra liquid stored up to carry her to the next oasis!

Hubby reminds me of the professional wrestling referees who always manage to look away at the wrong time and in the wrong direction. They argue in the corner about a minor problem while the other teammate is getting whacked with a folding chair in mid-mat!

If Seriously Drunk Sweetiie can finagle Sober Legal Eagle Hubby THIS well while in her cups, he has NO chance at all. Just memorize the line "Yes, Dear! Of course, Darling! Anything you want, Honey! Sorry, Sweetie! Great idea, Sugar!" Then repeat as needed! (That is...in answer to anything she says!!) That will get Hubby through until she meets the Hung Hunk Heir with the Learjet! (As much as she'll be going out on the town from now on, that won't be too long!)
5*

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by Anonymous10/11/12

Is it ok to comment on comments?

Lickideesplit just made my night.

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by betrayedbylove10/11/12

Fucking Slut

Well written tale about a fucking slut cheating whore bitch skank slut wife fucking others in front of her husband. That's all.
Dump the cunt.

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by Anonymous10/12/12

Read

At the beginning of the story it says that its a cuckold story and if you don't like it don't read it. There was a warning. I really enjoyed it. It would be nice to see a sequel.

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by Anonymous10/12/12

He is probably

Safer just getting a hand job from the slut - no idea what the cheating whore caught. Divorce

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by Anonymous10/20/12

always hungry for pussy or cock

Love watching my wife suck swallow and fuck other guys

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by phil221312/27/12

Poor Annie never saw it cumming.

I wondered how this job was after the vacation and the last day of the vacation. The author has built a great foundation to a Bohemian 'festival ;the possibility for poor Annie are endless. Did Annie get promoted to special assistant to any key management person?? Well written erotic story. Thank you great read.

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by Anonymous01/02/13

Great story!

Thanks for the great story!

Not sure why people always hate on cuckold stories but I guess they are just projecting their own bitterness/misogyny/happened to them IRL.

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by bhavin75501/09/13

Sexy one

Wow, wht Gary way to convince the hubby. Love to have such a bitchy sex crazy wife.

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by Anonymous01/15/13

I agree with comment made by Softly years ago.....

Its erotic seeing you gf/ wife flirting and maybe more. Those poor driven sods who choose to read then rant against it defy logic. Thanks for sexy story.

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by Anonymous02/03/13

alternate ending

The turning point was the hot tub. The husband should have jumped in the tub, and taken Annie aside. He would tell her that it would be the 4 naked jokers or their marriage. If she chose the 4 jokers, he would leave then, and she need not return home.

The divorce for adultery would be filed on Monday, and the court would have her take a complete medical exam. All the people in the hot tub would be subpoened for the hearing. If any of the men have wives, they would learn what their husbands are really like. On the witness stand, under oath they would have to tell if they had sex with Annie. There may be a history here that she has been going behind the husband's back.

A second step would be a lawsuit for damages against Annie's company - their marriage and her moral outlook. It's called sexual harrassment based on the atmosphere in the office. Annie is not the woman he married. The lawsuit would be for millions of dollars. Annie would lose everything - home, car, savings, credit cards, and even her clothing in the house. She would be one of the first witnesses, and also lose her job. Her decision will cost her everything.

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by wowsex03/25/13

Would love

to see a sequel to this amazing story

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by Anonymous03/31/13

Single Failure

Why didn't hubby nail Nicole... or one of the other girls ???

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by Anonymous04/03/13

huge slut

She reminds me my mom who once got fingered and fucked by several guys in a pool party

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by Anonymous04/20/13

No problem

I would not have slept with her at the end - who knows what she might have "caught". And as for her "no big deal" comment. You can correct your "No" when you get home and file for divorce from a cheating slut. You want to stay married to a wife that thinks her actions were no big deal? I think not.

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by Anonymous04/26/13

I fingered myself!

Are you people fucking retarded? First off, it is just a story and secondly, the author clearly mentions the nature of the story at the very beginning. If you're such prudes, why did you proceed after the warning? The story was totally hot and I fingered myself really hard. Twice.

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by DontBeShyNow06/14/13

Sequel PLEASE

I would love to see Annie get drunk once again and have many more encounters that she passes off as not a big deal. I love it when she says that the guy just stuck it in and it wasn't a big deal, and I would love to read more.

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by Anonymous06/19/13

Great Story

This story is one of my all time favorites - great job!

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by Anonymous07/10/13

5 stars

If you make a sequel or ch2, don't continue making the husband out to be a wimp or cuckold, rather, write in where he fights back and she this time finds him with a few hotties that make her extremely jealous and should be. after men don't like sloppy seconds especially in her circle. I am of course noticing how the other men don't seem to mind the other women going almost nude.

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by Anonymous08/06/13

Nicely paced adventure

The handjob was probably my favorite scene.

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by Anonymous08/13/13

Getting a bit bored...

I've read three of your stories so far. I loved the first one, and I'm disappointed that the other two are copies of the first one. Seriously? This story (and the other two I read) read as if you just re-wrote the same story and changed the location/names.

Also, I have no problem with cuckold stories, but I have a problem with stories without resolutions. Unlike the cuckold stories I'm used to, the guy doesn't actually seem to like his wife having an affair, meaning we need to know what happens next. This kind of story needs an epilogue or something, cause it ends without an actual ending. We never learned what his wife would say when she's not drunk, and how he would respond to an actual conversation about this.

Overall, you're a good writer and you have a lot of potential. I understand this is based off another work, but basing all of your stories off the same work is how you end up with all of your stories being exactly the same. Also, try writing complete stories next time. Good job, and keep writing.

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by auhunter0410/28/13

Not Me

If my wife acted like Anne there would be some serious trouble.
I do not think our relationship would survive and the company would seriously regret their casual attitudes

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by Anonymous10/31/13

Great Story

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by d_p_sweetie12/03/13

This is my all-time favorite slut wife story. I love how she treats him like an idiot. I love how she plays innocent. I want more of Annie...

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by Grampareg12/08/13

Annie

Annie is a fantastic slut wife. Wish my wife was just like her as I would love her to be shared and well used just like Annie

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by rightbank01/05/14

you warned us

and like a fool Ii still read it.
stupid is as stupid does.
why be married if you don't mind if she fucks everyone in the company?

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by Anonymous02/21/14

LOVED THE STORY

You should do the story again from the viewpoint of the wife. People need to lighten up. Sex can be very fun to watch!

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by Anonymous04/15/14

Back of Vann

You have your wife anny take on tha hole beach party aswell as the back of the bus section.
Too good for me an my friend hear in the D'house just dont pick it up when dem girls are around.We'be safe now end all have constent errect and touchit to!!
Dont go to dem shops hard or police siren time,,,,haha!
Rite moor is a must for us all,and maybee we can than domenate tha shit.

Piece out

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by tazz31704/27/14

ANNIE'S GOT A YOYO

and she better make sure the string doesn't break, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Anonymous04/27/14

YOU ARE A DUMB ASS (IN MY OPINION)

I DO NOT LIKE THIS SLUT STORY. THIS STORY IS A PIECE OF SHIT. THE WOMAN IN THE STORY IS A WHORE. I DO NOT LIKE STORIES WITH WHORES IN THEM. THERE ARE TOO MANY WHORES IN LIFE LET ALONE I HAVE TO READ A STORY WITH A WHORE IN IT. WHY DID YOU WRITE THIS STORY WITH A WHORE IN IT? WHAT IS YOUR PROBLEM DUMB ASS? YOU COULD CHOOSE TO WRITE ABOUT ANYTHING AND INSTEAD YOU CHOOSE TO WRITE ABOUT THIS SHIT. WHAT IS YOUR PROBLEM DUMB ASS? YOU ARE REALLY STUPID? ARE YOU A PATHETIC FOOL? ARE YOU A LOSER? IS THIS WHY YOU WRITE THIS SHIT? IS THIS WHAT YOU THINK OF WOMEN? IF YOU TREAT WOMEN LIKE WHORES THEY WILL TREAT YOU LIKE THE DUMB ASS THAT YOU ARE. YOU REALLY ARE A DUMB ASS. YOU DON'T KNOW HOW TO TREAT A WOMAN. YOU TREAT A WOMAN LIKE SHE IS A PIECE OF FURNITURE. DO YOU WANT A WOMAN WHO IS LIKE A PIECE OF FURNITURE DUMB ASS?

WHAT IS YOUR PROBLEM?

WHAT IS YOUR FUCKING PROBLEM DUMB ASS?

WHY DO YOU WRITE THIS SHIT.

THIS IS JUST MY OPINION. MAYBE SOMEONE ELSE WILL DISAGREE. MAYBE THERE WILL BE A DUMB ASS WHO LIKE THIS STORY.

THERE IS 7 BILLION PEOPLE IN THIS FUCKING WORLD. I GUESS THERE IS A DUMB ASS OUT THERE WHO WILL LIKE THIS STORY.

I AM NOT A DUMB ASS AND I DO NOT LIKE THIS STORY.

I THINK YOU ARE A DUMB ASS. NO OFFENSE BUT I DID NOT LIKE YOUR STORY.

I THINK WOMEN ARE LIKE TREASURES. I DO NOT HAVE A WOMAN MYSELF BUT IF I DID HAVE A WOMAN I WOULD NOT TREAT HER LIKE A WHORE. I WOULD TREAT HER LIKE A BUTIFUL PAINTING AND I WOULD LOOK AT HER ALL THE TIME. I WOULD KEEP HER CLEAN. I WOULD KEEP HER VERY NICE. IF I HAD A WOMAN I WOULD BE VERY GOOD TO HER. I WOULD FEED HER AND KEEP HER CLEAN. I WOULD TREAT HER LIKE A GOD. I WOULD BE VERY GOOD TO HER. I WOULD KEEP HER CLEAN AND KEEP HER HAPPY. I WOULD BUY HER CLOTHES. I WOULD GO TO VICKY SECRET AND BUY MY WOMAN ALL THE CLOTHES SHE WANTS. I WOULD BUT HER SEXY UNDERWEAR. I WOULD LIKE IT VERY MUCH IF SHE PUT ON THIS SEXY UNDERWEAR. IF SHE WANTS TO SHE CAN PUT IT IN MY MOUTH. MAYBE SHE WANTS TO PUT IT IN MY MOUTH. SOMETIMES PEOPLE SAY THAT I TALK TOO MUCH.

IN THE MOVIE RAIN MAN THE MAN CAN COUNT TOOTH PICKS THAT FALL OUT OF THE BOX. HE SAYS, I'M AN EXCELLENT DRIVER. HE SAYS A LOT OF FUNNY THINGS.

FOREST GUMP WAS ANOTHER GREAT MOVIE. FOREST SAID THAT LIFE IS LIKE A BOX OF CHOCOLATES. YOU NEVER NO WHAT YOU ARE GOING TO GET. THAT IS TRUE.

I ALSO LIKE THOMAS JEFFERSON. HE WAS A GREAT MAN.

I ALSO LIKE EDISON. DID YOU KNOW THAT IT TOOK HIM MORE THAN 1,000 TRIES TO INVENT THE LIGHT BULB.

I KNOW A LOT OF STUFF.

BACK TO THE STORY. IT SUCKED. SORRY BUT I TELL IT LIKE IT IS.

I HOPE YOU LIKE TO NO THE TRUTH. IF NOT THEN I CAN TELL YOU THAT YOUR STORY WAS REALLY GOOD. IT WAS A GREAT STORY. OH GOSH, I REALLY LOVE IT. THIS WAS THE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ. I REALLY LIKE THE WAY YOU MAKE THE GIRL SEEM LIKE SUCH A NICE SLUT. I REALLY LIKE THAT. I LIKE THE WAY YOU RIGHT ABOUT A WHORE. YES. IT WAS REALLY GOOD. MY COCK IS HARD JUST THINKING ABOUT IT RITE NOW. I WANT THAT WHORE TO SUCK MY COCK. YOU RIGHT ABOUT IT SO GOOD. I WANT TO GET HER TO SUCK MY COCK.

WHAT THE FUCK IS YOUR PROBLEM DUMB ASS? CAN'T YOU TAKE A JOKE. YOUR STORY WAS FINE. NO. IT WASN'T FINE. IT WAS GREAT.

DO YOU FEEL BETTER NOW?

I HOPE YOU CAN SLEEP AT NIGHT.

IF I WROTE THIS KIND OF TRASH GARBAGE I COULDN'T SLEEP AT NIGHT.

WHAT IF THIS WAS YOUR DAUGHTER THAT YOU WERE WRITING ABOUT? HOW WOULD THAT MAKE YOU FEEL?

WOULD YOU LIKE IT IF YOUR DAUGHTER WAS A WHORE? i THINK YOU WOULD. I THINK YOU WOULD WANT TO FUCK YOUR DAUGHTER. AM I WRITE? I KNOW I AM. OH KNOW I THINK I JUST GAVE YOU THE IDEA FOR YOUR NEXT PIECE OF SHIT STORY.

LIFE IS LIKE A BOX OF CHOCOLATES

YOU NEVER NO WHAT YOU ARE GOING TO GET

OK DUMB ASS

I LOVED YOUR STORY

LOVE

BOB

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by Anonymous06/14/14

great story

so loved the story - my wife has done much the same a few times now. gets me soo horny watching her play.

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by Anonymous08/24/14

Great story

Sluts make the best wives, as long as you don't mind sharing.

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by Anonymous09/16/14

slut wives

Slut wives are the best especially mine when she wants me to lick her used pussy and giggles while she tells me to eat her boyfriends cum. yum O

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by Anonymous10/06/14

And the moral is

DON'T NEGLECT YOUR WIFE.
Especially whem she wants to have fun

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by trikeboy510/19/14

nice flow of story

Loved your story, I like how the wife never seemed to think she was going to far or cheating, really adds to the anticipation. Keep writing.

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by impo_5810/19/14

Sorry...

Sorry, this story was writen to make the husband a moron, with a low intellect...I know is a comedy for making us laugh, but long gone is the time to laugh about idiots...

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by Anonymous11/02/14

i would be divorcing the bitch if she was my wife

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by dirtyoman11/05/14

Good One Ay!!!!

Yeah I liked this story. I'm wundering why he didn't tag that BIG TITS with the bellyring. I mean she offered her big fine ass right there, & this dude to dumb to know it. Ahh well itsstill a good "wackin story"!!

Thanks I enjoyed it, simple, lots a action, good discriptions & a bit of comedy.

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by Anonymous11/17/14

slut wife

if she was my wife i would have divorced her and thrown her out of the house
fucking bitch

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by Anonymous11/25/14

Is she clueless or is he slow to react?

According to your story, the wife is either a clueless moron or she doesn't care that she just trashed her marriage. Either way her demeaning, degrading and humiliating her husband is going to have far reaching repercussions. Through her actions and words (It's no big deal?) she has clearly demonstrated to her husband that she neither loves nor respects him. That her marriage vows mean nothing. I seriously doubt he'll spend the night in that bed. When he recovers from the momentary "little head rules" law, he's going to pack and head out. I bet he'll be at the bank the next morning cleaning out the accounts and cancelling the credit cards. Next stop, the divorce attorneys. One of the things I really disliked about this story was that it was unfinished. You never dealt with the fallout from her actions. And I really don't like stories in which the main characters are so unlikeable. She's a common cheating slut. And he comes off looking like a complete fool. Nothing really interesting or entertaining about this sad mess. No stars.

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by Anonymous11/25/14

Humorous little ditty

What a whore! What a dumb ass! Funny and erotic, though.

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by Anonymous12/11/14

He deserves whatever she does.

Hope he enjoys the STD's, and the kid. Maybe someday she'll find herself a husband instead of a dickless drone.

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by tazz31712/11/14

MAYBE HE DESERVES WHAT HE GOT

and what he is going to get TK U MLJ LV NV

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by impo_6012/12/14

He was stupid and she a whore....but...

He was stupid and she a whore....but what kind of firm she worked? They doing all that during working hours, the firm should be bankrupt a long time ago...This story just for us to laugh...1*

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by Anonymous12/19/14

What type of puss would actually like to see his wife with another man? Pathetic.

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by Anonymous01/13/15

LOL

it's not time to walk away , it's time to RUN.

seeing as her female co workers all seem to think she is soooo lucky to have him as her husband ... perhaps the 1st thing he should say to her in the morning is ....

when do i get to fuck nicole , molly & christine ???

depending on her answer , the 2nd thing he should ask her is ....
where would you like the divorce papers served ???

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by Anonymous02/12/15

I AGREE WITH CANADAVE "TO ANON USA": WHY READ THE STORIES YOU KNOW YOU WOULD NOT LIKE

I don't like vampire & zombie movies and i never watch them.
Loving wife & voyeur husband stories are a genre, very much like certain movies... When an ex CIA agent or Navy Seal takes on 200 members of Russian mafia and kills them all, we know it is a movie.
When a wife fucks 4 guys in one day while the husband is either watching or is just 20 yards away, it is a story, gentlemen.
clarkoverns writes good stories, this one is not his best (or worst for that matter) but it did get 100 (ONE HUNDRED) comments, including this one. People read it, & 100 of us have bothered to submit a comment.
SOME WOMEN AND SOME MEN HAVE CHEATED ON THEIR SPOUSE SINCE FOREVER. D.N.A. HAS PROVEN THAT THERE ARE NO TRULY MONOGAMOUS SPECIES ON EARTH. HOMO SAPIENS IS NO EXCEPTION IN THAT REGARD.
* * *
A piece of advice:
If you share your car, you get less miles out of it; if you share your wife, you lose nothing, she may even last longer.
... & if you have a voyeur side, you might get a kick out of it

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