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Craving more~
sprout, grew, bud and blossom, a rose bush with it's first bloom, and more to come, excellent write vixxx. Your talents shine in this gripping series of poetry, enjoy the frames of writing for once they are written and set in your list like scrap book roses they will still shine.
enchanting and erotic poetry~
with more to cum!
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Searing gothic visions... images of Templars, maidens and purity of union... desire mixing with the Mists of Avalon. Very very hot with drawing the reader into the mystical truths.
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Du Lac~
Yeah, Of Course I Love It!
Please don't ever stop writing.
=>crayon
this is so searing....
hot from top to bottom. you certainly put this together in wonderful fashion. it's a little looser from the others i've seen, but yet still conveys the same force as the others. but as to a favorite stanza, i've got to pick this out of which i read over and over again.......absolutely love it.......wonderful job!!!! and i'll throw in a wink too.......don
the forgotten favorite stanza.....
that really pulls me in the most.
His first touch.
Wind swept embrace, silk kissed;
slumbering passion's soft awake;
nudged with tepid trace of lure
under twilight's marbled tent
Moon's sword- edged, gleaming smirk;
this Crusader's celestial torch;
His ten touch tribute's ally
This crusader...
touches deeply on many levels. Great stuff!
Medieval Beauty Captured and Taken With Passion!
The building imagery is both encapturing and tantalizing! Every sense is entranced in waves of emotion climaxing in the escape and the beauty of the touch-craved context.
You've got me craving, keep 'em coming.
Truely great
The want and lust is...
Good God...
What can I say?
Your words, like melodies, float in my mind. Your beautiful descriptions take a intimate moment between two people, and make it all the more erotic... what can I say?
Captured
Ratcheting upward in image and feel,
your mind is powerfully commanding;
demanding attention to all that unfolds,
crescendo and then satiation.
All in all, not too bad , sorry it took so long to get to your CML series but it is, after all, demanding and to be fair to the Magnificent Warrior Queen, I had to be wholly and fully focused.
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