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by Anonymous

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by Jennifer C04/24/05

LOL

Liked it.

~ J

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by Anonymous04/30/05

Crap

Crap not poetry

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by annaswirls05/09/05

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this was a funny one-- I think if you could polish the ending it would step up a level

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by electricblue6608/13/14

god, ain't that the truth!

loved it

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