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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/24/05

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This small write is extremly powerful. The title brings upon the reader an image and slowly we float through the lines to be smashed in the face with two simple words...
I blaspheme. Huge impact with two words excellent example of emotional qualities emitted through rhetoric.
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Du~
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by Jennifer C04/24/05

Short

But indeed very powerful,
a great piece.
~ J

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by Anonymous04/30/05

More crap

Geez, is this a joke or someth9ing?

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by tazz31709/01/12

TALKING...FEELING,,,,,DOING

3 choices to get it right, TK U MLJ LV NV

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