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by Anonymous

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by My Erotic Tail04/24/05

fickle-itis

aint no telling with those creatures, they are as flighty as the wind and may even be the next person on the phone calling to say I love you sad poem, very well written. Hey tongue long time no see. (O_O)

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by Jennifer C04/24/05

A

nice piece,
well written
and sadly very
realistic lol.
Good work.

~ J

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by Bridget6904/25/05

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A reflective piece weighed down by the heavy silence of finality.

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by My Erotic Tale04/25/05

bummer

aint that the way it is ?

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by Anonymous04/26/05

a great guy

with a heart as big as yours deserves better.

~Syn

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by LeBroz08/25/05

~~

Now here's another slightly older,
hello, goodbye
and then it's over.

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