Finding Mr. Wrong Ch. 03

more please

I did like it. It just seemed too short. I can't wait for the next chapter though! Give us all the juicy details.

stop teasing

okay school's out so I'm sure you can manage to write more than a page at a time...
It's good, I like it, keep up the style and give us MORE

Brilliant!

I love this serie, you're a very talented writer,thank you

Good title,

but you have to pay more attention to your word selection, or use an editor. I like the characters and the direction, though it is hard to read sometimes (when you see 'all', but are suposed to read "I'll").

More please

I hope you will keep going with this story, I love it!

more pls

tell us more! what happens after dinner?

we want MORE!

Very intense, I have your submissions bookmarked so I can check quickly if you have done any more writing. I have missed you sorely and wish you would take up the story-telling again to complete the story. It is good, and you have talent. Can't wait to hear from you!!

Abolutely loved it!

I found your story scanning through the older stories- it is a great story! I hope you will decide to continue it, I am so curious of what will happen next.

Really Good!

I really liked it! I think you should definitley continue the series.

Continue!!!

You stopped at the best part!!!!

UGH

I READ ALL OF THE STORY , JUST TO LEARN THAT I WOULD HAVE TO DRAW MY OWN CONCLUSIONS AT THEE END :-( BIG LET DOWN , BUT THE STORY WAS AWESOME COME BACK !!!

Please continue this story is just getting good

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Interested in how it ends.

Ahhhhhhhh

YOU HAVE TO KEEP GOING - I would love to know what happens with Noelle and Charles after dinner