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Wonderful
Poetry, dreams are easily lost and hearts easily broken, i love how this poem shows how easy it can be to lose your way in life. I loved it.
Cutting
This poem is a wound reopened. I want to avert my eyes and not look but the voyeur in me insists on looking.
Beautiful seems an inappropriate word but there is beauty in the poem's refusal to compromise and hide behind artifice.
b'brig
Versatile
I like the way you write erotica one day, and serious poetry the next, then just for a change some of the sexiest stories I have ever read. It must be the way you write. Or am I blinded by desire for you, after reading your works? After reading the erotic poems and stories I just want to cum and cum again!
I remember...
saying to myself I would never be like my parents so serious all the time.., always up tight and snap at you when ya ask to do something, and slowly and so graduale we become exactly that ...concerned...parents...
A realistic transition...
from innocence to experience. We grow up with so many ideals, only to realize it's not at all like we'd envisioned it.
This is the drawn conclusion...
of so many of us women, isn't it? Unfortunately, it's not pessimism, but realism that often times reminds us we're not naive girls anymore. I sometimes wish I fell under the 'ignorance is bliss' clause but I guess I'm even too old for that shelter. Jenn, this was a wonderfully layed out bitch session. Thank you for sharing it with Me today.
Vixxx
Heart felt
As good as your erotic poetry is J your other poetry never fails to tug at my heart,nice job.
Some meanness
in me wants to say "Well it doesn't get any better." but then of course you would know that I am only kidding. Good job of expressing your emotions here. Now the old man in me wants to say that if you let the brokeness turn to hardness and bitterness it will not help your writing, but if you allow it to grind you to dust you will be ever more powerful -
REMORSE ON A LIFE
not well spent or happy.. TK U MLJ LV NV
I know
precisely how you feel Jennifer.
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