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To be Continued??
To be Continued??
Sensual Word Play and Touch
Author, I think you have it in spades plus the written ability to display sensual emotion through your set up and plot path. Then, it is a decided plus that there aren't any villians to disrupt the flow.
Good work and hopefully more to come. Thanks with Regard
Great story
Great story although with some jarring mistakes in grammar and spacing otherwise it was neat.
Good work.
Fiver
Eh, there is a fiver, from my side. Nothing asked in return.
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