- All
Comments (6) - Add a
Comment - Send
Feedback Send private anonymous feedback to the author (click here to post a public comment instead).
| Literotica Toy Store ADULT TOY & DVD STORE FAST & DISCREET |
Literotica XXX Webcams 24/7 LIVE CAMS - FREE PREVIEW W/AUDIO! |
Literotica Adult Movies STREAMING ADULT MOVIES PAY PER MINUTE |
English
~
First strophe is a bit too choppy and the last line is a little weak. Other than that, I do feel the beat in the poem and it's good. :)
*****
Your poem is mentioned in todays New Poems Review.
Tess
Dancin' to tha beat~
Yepper I liked this one. Nice flow.
Fun lil poem here.
Just wanna dance down tha street,
to tha beat~~Hip Hoppin..
Skippin clappin
down tha street
to tha beat..
do what da diddy~~~*winks*
Pulsates...
with great rhythm and energy throughout.
vibrant and loud...hehehe
great beat to your poetry
wow!
I liked this very much!
TY
Boo
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to Street Music or
More submissions by Remec.