The Enchanted Garden Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

by Anonymous05/03/05

First!

Very erotic!

by Emeelia12/04/10

This story rocks. More detail please, and delete ch.2.

Tetan is here, a creature from a different dimention. He said he needed to be reborn through a human in order to stay. His sex act on the virgin girl in the garden was supposed to impregnate her with himself! She woke up the next morning, and though he had dissapeared, she knew he was inside her still. I was looking forward to reading how her "pregnancy" progressed. How it would feel to incubate a being so strange. How long would it last, could she communicate with him while he grew inside her? Could he give her pleasure? How large does he get before he can be born? How would the birth work? Does she even live through it? What would he look like? Would he grow, and stay to have sex with her again? Or would he leave? Or would he get her pregnant again? This second chapter is terrible. Chapter one is original and stimulating. Don't write more stories unless you can remember what you wrote before.

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