I've read it twice--it's all I can take. It's very emotional and very real.
JimDinMN
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Anonymous05/02/05
Quite a Nice Touch
As what appears to be a first effort - I'm very impressed by your depth of emotion and the ability shown in delivering it. You showed in tangible scenes a believeable but difficult reality of life and love. Almost a self purging as real as you made it seem.
Thanks and we look forward to future efforts - perhaps as this unfolds or another effort. with Regard
Thank you for the encouragement, I am writing more, and in some ways there is a tremendous amount of what really happened to me in this series, but with licence. Parts one to four are already pending and I am working on later chapters now, I hope I don't dissapoint everyone but really appreciate the comments made so far.
Thanks Again
Executive Gent.
Realistically captures the conflicting emotions of grief and remembering better times. I look forward to further installments.
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Anonymous05/03/05
Thank you!
Please continue, this is an ever present problem, I'd like to read Your view/solution?
John
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Anonymous05/04/05
Understanding your feelings
Having lost my wife of twenty one years only 19 1/2 months ago, I fully understand your dream and emotions. When they visit you at times like that it brings peace and contentment, not the anguish and bewilderment that day to day life brings. If only we could turn back the hands of time.....
English
Oh Wow!!
I've read it twice--it's all I can take. It's very emotional and very real.
JimDinMN
Quite a Nice Touch
As what appears to be a first effort - I'm very impressed by your depth of emotion and the ability shown in delivering it. You showed in tangible scenes a believeable but difficult reality of life and love. Almost a self purging as real as you made it seem.
Thanks and we look forward to future efforts - perhaps as this unfolds or another effort. with Regard
Thank you..
Thank you for the encouragement, I am writing more, and in some ways there is a tremendous amount of what really happened to me in this series, but with licence. Parts one to four are already pending and I am working on later chapters now, I hope I don't dissapoint everyone but really appreciate the comments made so far.
Thanks Again
Executive Gent.
Very good first...
Realistically captures the conflicting emotions of grief and remembering better times. I look forward to further installments.
Thank you!
Please continue, this is an ever present problem, I'd like to read Your view/solution?
John
Understanding your feelings
Having lost my wife of twenty one years only 19 1/2 months ago, I fully understand your dream and emotions. When they visit you at times like that it brings peace and contentment, not the anguish and bewilderment that day to day life brings. If only we could turn back the hands of time.....
Ok read
Ok read but check your spelling please...
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