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by ms.read12/09/07

This story is mostly made up of information. There isn't any plotline or hot sex in it. Also, you repeat the information over in different sentance forms. I would reccomend getting a goal for your main character, and a reason for the antagonist of the story to want to not want the main character get his goal.

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by Anonymous06/16/13

Use more paragraphs - reading on-screen, these large chunks of text are too much.

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