well, I've read a couple of your stories now, and I think they're great. I really liked the description just when she started in on herself. It's hard not to find one's self trapped in cliche, when after all it's the same parts in use in every story, so it's good when you manage somehow to grasp the essence of sex (which somehow chemically transcends the cliche) and recreate it in a few words.
Anyway, nice going.
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Anonymous05/26/08
Wishing you were my neighbor
Unfortunately I don't have any neighbors that close to me. My pussy would love a jerk off partner.
English
fun tantasy
This was a simple fun fantasy with a great ending. good job.
Very Good!
This was a good piece of work. Fun, light, and I like the hook you leave for a sequel.
I'd be most interested in reading said sequel, if you're working on it.
good work
Nicely done! Fun and credible. Waiting for the sequel if you're working on it.
Super Story!!!
What a great ending!!!
What they said
That says it all
mmmmmm...real niiiice
very well written
Red hair-less and Deliciously Decadent
I could see myself within your "grip". Reminded me of(no-shit her true name) Patty Ball. She lived in the next apt. 'Keep on keepin on'
fantastic.
well, I've read a couple of your stories now, and I think they're great. I really liked the description just when she started in on herself. It's hard not to find one's self trapped in cliche, when after all it's the same parts in use in every story, so it's good when you manage somehow to grasp the essence of sex (which somehow chemically transcends the cliche) and recreate it in a few words.
Anyway, nice going.
Wishing you were my neighbor
Unfortunately I don't have any neighbors that close to me. My pussy would love a jerk off partner.
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