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Carbon

bySabina_Tolchovsky©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/27/05

Sweet

aww the forgotten love.
Sweet an heartbreaking~
Nice flow, an great metaphoric usage.
Keep'm comin.

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by Anonymous04/27/05

mention

mentioned in reviews

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by My Erotic Tail04/27/05

excellent

I love the way you wove nature, emotions, passion and poetry in this write, a true master of the pen

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by duckiesmut04/28/05

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"I will love you
the way fire loves carbon"

That has been floating around in my head all afternoon. Thank you. :)

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by dcpoet4404/28/05

2 double shots.....

of fire water coming right up. cheers!!! why not......it's a hell of a great piece....nicely done sabina.......don

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by Bridget6904/28/05

Beautiful...

expression of unconditional love.

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by Amyfriend10/28/08

Very strong

and packs a punch in just a few words. Thanks.

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by tazz31708/28/12

ONE'S FEELINGS OUT SHINE THE OTHER

and will outlast forever, TK U MLJ LV NV

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