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Marvelous
Excellent endeavor, Cat5. This is one of the best stories I have read on this site. It would be a shame if you did not continue to develop your writing talents and perhaps persue a career in writing.
Best wishes!
Absolutely fantastic and warm
Comments hell, it was heartrending and sexy and sensual and great.
OK! Chick Flick story narrated by a guy and it still sold this mature male.
Thank you for such a great read and emotions.
Superb
I've read this story 2 or 3 times before but never left a comment. I believe this is your best story and one of best posted on this site.
Boyd
Damn!
Absolutely great! Just fantastic! Great piece of literature. I was feeling kinda down before I read this, now I'm feeling all warm inside. Thanks!
Cute
^_^ You're story was cute. It seemed to be a little to "perfect" in the story line and there were many parts I wish you had gone into detail or explained better. Like the salesman ship part in the beginning. At first I thought he might be a used car salesman or something. I dunno. And the whole sex thing... lacked passion and seemed unrealistic. Most women don't have instant cums or just take a few strokes and licks to get us off or begging for cock. For the most part and over all plot it was cute and you could defintely work on it to... as they say "thicken the stew". Hey tho, I'm not a great writer either but that's why I haven't uploaded any to the web because I know they're not good enough yet.
My tenth time of reading - and there will be more,
I think it's ten times I've read "Sales Team" and each time I get great pleasure from reading/re-reading it. It is a really nice take on the "rags to riches" theme and has 2 likeable characters. Thank you, Cat5, for this pleasure
Outstanding!
Cat5,
I have read this story many times (8, 10, 12?) since you wrote it and I still works. Then I read through the comments and I have to say that if Executive Gent, Ronnie W, Rpsuch, and a few really talented authors like your work that much, I won't say much. This could easily be the best story on the site!
Thanks and I look forward to more.
wonderful
I truly enjoyed this story...I like thte way that Phil loved Holly...WildWildBest
Beautiful Story!
This is a truly beautiful story of fun, kindness and love. I really enjoyed it. Thank you!
Nookiehunter
One of the best...
stories I've seen in a long time! Wonderfully well written, warm and emotional. Bravo!
Really drew me in
Kind of new here and only read about a dozen other submissions. I was just looking for some porno comparable to Penthouse Forum. BUT this warmed me all over and not just my... Anyway really gr8 reading vivid exciting!
One of my favourites
I've read this story over and over again. Wish I could find a sweet sensitive guy like that.
I saw this on the high scores list
and was impressed with the 800 and some votes. So I just had to read it. It's well worth the votes and the score. Great job.
Out Standing!
Please write more. Your the best.
Awesome! Missing your stories
Hi,
The stories you write are awesome. I am constantly scanning this site and stories online for your new stories. Please write some new stuff soon.
Thanks - Great story
Thanks for writing the great story. I thoroughly enjoyed it. You really put a lot of time into it and I appreciate that.
Really really really good...
One of the best stories I've read on Literotica, bar-none. The characters were great and their relationship was perfect. Thank you for a great read.
A very enjoyable read
I really enjoyed this story - It rolled along at a very nice pace for a short story and has a huge 'feel good' after effect.
Superb story
Best story I read on lit.
Need I say more?
Beautiful!
Wonderfully written, by far one of the best work. Love the characters. Thank you so much for the beautiful story.
my favourite
i loved this story. i wish it was novel-length!
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I read your story because it appeared in the pop-up window of another submission, I really liked. Now I can’t even remember what the story was. Yours is going immediately on my favorites list. I don’t have to think about it. I know I will enjoy reading it again. It is an amazingly romantic, well crafted tale. I loved it. Thank you for taking the time and making the effort to write.
Couldnt stop reading ... fantastic !!!
I started reading at 1:20am and couldnt stop until the end at 1:50am. Truly a gem of literacy. Thank you. A. from Malaysia
Awesome, Beautiful, Creative, Diverse, Elegant,...
Loved it!!! the comment title describes your work and your characters and your ideas. So far, I have fell inlove with all of your characters...I really wanted to comment on the poker story but it wouldn't let me! :-(( Anyway, you are very talented please keep up the good work.
TC, LF
haha
i tried multi-tasking between this and the olympics and your story won! i love your stories and would be very grateful for another story!
I enjoyed it even more
the second time I read it. The characters were wonderful, the situation believable.
All except that you included smart managers at 2 levels. They weren't just counting the sales, but asking questions of why. How rare. Of course for the plot line, it had to be that way. And including Mary the waitress was a nice touch.
Please write more.
Best love story I read
I am a 65 year old Romantic man. This was a Fantastic Love Story. We need more of this.
fanstastic
....not! i hated it.
A true gem! Excellent writing.
Superb writing. Inspiring. Great characters, both believable, and dynamic. Wonderful story, that really inspires. You have learned much in living & you have readily used it to craft a superb tale. Keep writing, your work is superb and at a professional level.
Mr. Coco your comment is exiguous, attneded with no reasons & I suspect done at the instigation of a rival that wanted to win the prize. If that is the case, it didn't work. Try honing your talent. Your comment is very close to constituting libel. (this opinion is from a practising attorney in Ont. Cda.: & N. Y. S., U.S.A.)
Excellence
This is simply the BEST story on this site and the best romance I have read.
just.... wow!
this would make an awesome rom-com, women would lap this up if it came out in the cinema!
Great read!
I absolutely adored the plot and the characters of your story!
I enjoyed how sex was secondary to the relationship aspects of the story; furthermore, I enjoyed the complex narrative concerning the world of business.
A great story!
whoot
Awesome! Best thing I read in ages...and if you could arange a Phil for me, so much the better!
That was lovley
I really reallt liked it! It was a nice story as well as sex, the target part made me laugh!
transcends literotica
What a wonderfully told story. Easily the best erotic story I've ever read, and I've been reading them for 30 years. It appealed on so many levels.
If you never wrote again, you already have had a successful writing career, but I do hope to read more from you! If you could write screenplays, they would attract higher quality actors, and maybe porn could go totally mainstream.
One of the best stories I've read recently
Even though it a highly unlikely series of events, it was easy to suspend my disbelief. All the characters were engaging and likeable, the sex was nicely handled and the target was a riot - twice. I haven't read anything else by you yet, but I will in the next day or so. The subtitle "Desperate woman tries to pay back man who saves her." is what caught my attention. It was good that there were no contrived melodramatic issues cropping up causing temporary heartbreak followed by tearful reunions.
-- srgeek --
fantastic
its really a good story.i cordially congratulate author.well done........u r really a good writer.
sorry
I have read this several times and never left a vote. Should have. But never to late. Just wonderful. Thank you
This is wonderful
This was easily the best erotic story I've read so far, this story made me feel so happy :)
Please keep on writing, I'd love to read more from you.
You should also think about writing screenplays, you'd be really good at it ;)
This was my second time reading "Sales Team"
This was my second time reading "Sales Team". I liked it then and enjoyed it again.
-- srgeek --
I love this story
This story is full of gratitude, sexual tension, and deep satisfaction. I love it.
Here I am again
I was browsing the Romance Toplist and came to "Sales Team". I read so much that I forget story titles, but "Sales Team" seemed familiar. As soon as I read the first line, I remembered the story. I enjoyed it so much the last time that I read it again, I'm glad I did, it continues to be one of my top choices on the Literotica site. Thank you for writing and posting it.
-- srgeek --
Awesome
awesome..loved the story
Fanastic Story
I believe I read Sales Team a number of years ago, but just re-read it as I was perusing the Romance Toplists. What a great story. A good mix of real life situations and fantastic(fantasy) sex.
Damn Good
A very good story. I was waiting for the other shoe to drop (cheating or something ) I like the ending
loved this story
Initially I felt the circumstances in which how Phil and Holly met were kind of cliche and cheesy. But as I read on, the story just got better. I guess that's cos Holly isn't the usual damsel in distress and not overly horny like all the other stories on Lit (lol). Or maybe I'm just a sucker for success stories..
Brilliant story
This story was exceptionally well written. Actually one of the best I have read in many years. I saw maybe two mistakes in grammar or spelling at most. The descriptions were good and the characters were great and believable. It started well and ended well. You are a very good writer and should continue to indulge in your gift. Good luck in future projects!
amazing
This story was really good, i love the way you built up the background story before they jumped into sex. the plot was amazing and your grammar was impeccable. keep it up!!
Best on this site.
I have been reading stories on this site for several years. This is the best I have every read by far. You did a fantastic job of developing the characters before jumping into sex. That made it more real, as we watched them establish their relationship first. As in real life, holding off on sex until you establish a strong emotional bond makes it even better when you finally make love.
Briliant
What a story, great writing and erotic as well, I could read these all the time
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