Sales Team

Love transcends all

In the end, it was the loving relationship that made this story great. Of course the sex in the story was interesting, but all the little romantic things that brought Phil and Holly together are more important. If there was a moral to this story, it would be that teamwork works both in relationships as well as in business.

This is one of the best stories I've read on Literotica, and I'm going to add it to my favorites list. Thank you for writing and sharing such an enchanting romance story.

Again

Read it again for the 5th or 6th time. It doesn't change. Still as good as ever. Wonderful. Thank you. Jim

I WOULD LIKE FOR YOU TO CONTINUE TO WRITE THE SAME TYPE OF STORIES

IT WAS BEYONE GREAT; I've only experienced one other writer as good as you, not better but, just as good. IT started like this but expanded to a 27 part series. I'm not saying that it would work but ' think about it.

Wonderful!

What a great story! Sympathetic well-developed characters, hot sex scenes. It has it all. What a talent! Thank you. [Gualterio]

A superb "Opportunity Knocks" story

Many times opportunity knocks when you least expect it. Likewise with romance and sex. You've created one of the best stories including all three.

It's no wonder readers have rated Sales Team so highly.

Great Story

It's nice to read something positive about relationships, that there are "Nice Guys" that exist and that there are women who will appreciate a "Nice Guy" and can not try to beat them down or run over them.
If all relationships were like that one there would be fewer breakups.
Great writing job. Almost sounds like you have lived that experience.

Fantastic

This is a well-written story, with excellent character development. A romance indeed. Sure, the reader has to suspend disbelief since it's such a conflict-free story, but it's a great example of the romance genre. Thank you. I enjoyed reading it.

I hope you start writing here again!!!!

Great, great story! Just like the others you have written.

I sincerely hope you see this comment and the others below and realize there are many who visit this site not (just) to fondle themselves but are looking for great stories that show that hope, faith and even love are not just archaic or foreign concepts.

I sincerely hope to see more from you in the near future!

It sold me.

An extremely well written story with an interesting and innovative plot, deep rounded characters, and great believable sex scenes. As one other reviewer noted the story contains no conflict which is beyond belief in the real world. Phil was just too perfect. I have a tendency to write this way too-- the male is always perfect (ha)-- and it's the females with the flaws. Nevertheless, it was fun to read and it sold me as much as it did Phil's and Holly's bosses.

Loved it again forthe umpteenth time

Truly a gem of a story. It never gets old

good work

Extremely polished wwriting. Great plot and character development!

Read it again...

Just read it for the fourth or fifth time, and still love it.
Well written and a lovely story. Gives me a happy every time.

Thanks again...

Seems from preceding comments made,that you have hit on a 'nerve' for many readers on here Cat5...

...of course being just a grunt (11b) I may be wrong - just don't tell me that..:-)


Like others - I REALLY enjoy this story.


(did I just say that to a cat5 ?? :-))


Big Thanks----->email en route to you..

Great story!

BTW, the thing at the end of a meal is "dessert" and the place with lots of sand is "desert." The way to remember is that desserts are sugary sweet and have TWO S's.

There are also some other spelling and grammar errors that need to be corrected. You're a good writer who could benefit from a proofreader or editor.

Great Story

It is amazing how much older stuff is really well done!

Enjoyable

An uplifting story indeed, and well thought out. It's nice to read times when people help each other out for no other reason than kindness

Worth reading!

I will definitively read this amazing story again. THANKS FOR SHARING!

Awesome!

I really enjoyed reading your story. It's very well written.

Excellent story

By far the best I've ever read here.

Loved it.

It was a great story, I absolutely loved it, keep up the great work!

Positively wonderful -

Well conceived and very well written -

Decent people in challenging times who win - all the right stuff there -

Thank you -

Well written beautiful story

This was a beautiful story, which developed nicely. One can tell that you took time to write it, unlike some of the other tales on this site. If you don't already, you should definitely have a career in writing.

It was a classy story. I too appreciated the restraint on the male's part. I was fed up with reading (unrealistic) filth on this site so decided to try something new. I don't know why I hadn't read romance before on here... It seems rather an obvious choice for me come to think of it, as I am a hopeless romantic. Anyway, I am glad I gave the romance genre a chance. If the other selection of stories are half as good as this, I feel I will be sticking with the genre.

I will definitely be reading more from you. However, I would like to read a follow up on this particular story.

Thanks. xxx

Respect

Every character in the story was respected by the author. That is a feat rare on this site.

Congratulations!

Cordially,

Cladymoor

There is only

one word to describe how much I enjoy your strories: Bliss! Thank you!!!

fantastic

simply my favorite story on Literotica

Wow.

This is, beyond a doubt, the best story I have read on Literotica, and one of the best I have ever read. Good characterization, proper grammar, great story line. In a word, fantastic. Thank you for writing, and please keep it up.

beautiful

Truely a beautiful, upbeat, fulfilling reading experience. A classic study of receiving through giving.

Awesome!!

Fantastic story!! I keep getting pulled to this story everytime I visit this site. Good job.

WOW

The story was amazing! Everything from the grammar to the writing and the actual storyline was awesome. Everything flowed together and it was an excellent read! Keep writing! :)

Excellent

This by far the best story i've read; it shows that nice guys don't finish last and that there is still some good in the world

First Class Tale - Left Me Very Upbeat

A great story with great emotionally sensitive nuances, attractive characters, excellent writing style. SFeconomist. gave it a 'FIVE'!

Really Enjoyable

Great story keep writing.

Sweet!

A lovely "My Fair Lady" story. And, hey, it could happen, right?

Warm and Tender

Sweet story, well told. Thanks.

Love This Story!!!

If I ever need a pick me up I come back to this story. It is so nice and sweet and can't help but leave the reader feeling happier and with a smile on their face. Congratulations on another amazing story!

ONE OF THE NICEST STORIES I HAVE READ VERY BELEIVEABLE MORE PLEASE

Best Lit story ever!!!

Maybe it is just the mood I am in, but this had a sweetness. Not sacharine with an after taste, but a genuine sweetness, like fresh from the field strawberries with hand whipped cream. Just excellent!!

Awsome

Absolutely loved it. Is there likely to be any more in this series?
Its a pity that people that pass adverse comments cannot put their name to it and only remain anonymous.

They are a team

I really enjoyed your story. The character development for Holly was believable. Phil's part was great. Especially being the boss. Some day I hope to add a story as good as this. Thanks

Absolutely charming!

Great story Cat5! You have a fan here! Brilliant!

Wonderful

Not a stroke story. Just a wonderful adult story of two people growing in their love.

wow

I have read this story several times and I love it. But I am shocked by the virulence of the anon before. Unbelievable. I sadly have to admit that such people are real in my world although I wish they were not. But thank you Cat for the story. I enjoyed. Jim

amazing story

I've been reading Literotica since 2008 and have never been inspired to leave a comment. This story was more than just a "sex story" - it was sexy, well-written, plot-driven, and even made me tear up. I actually cared about these characters and could see aspects of myself in Holly. Maybe male readers want a "do me fast and dirty" story but for females there are far few true erotic fiction stories to be found on this site.

Don't sell yourself (so to speak) short by limiting your work to erotica on this site. If you haven't considered writing professionally, consider it now. Your words deserve to be read without the image of some girl performing fellatio as the sidebar.

Don't take the negative comments seriously, by the way. Those are obviously from guys who scroll through well-developed plots looking for hard sex in a desperate effort to get off. If they used their OTHER heads, they'd see how much value you have as a writer. Please keep updating and link to other sites where you publish, if you can.

tag teams

Well for some time now I ve been following these story lines but didn't like the rush to sex part but this story is one of a kind, Wish I'm Phil keep it up.

Normal People

Just a nice story with no one getting nuked. The writer has a command of the English language which made the story easy to read. It gets a five.

Great Story

Great story, just wish there was a little more sexual commentary to go with the really good story line.

What a wonderful story!

Simply a great story. Loved the development of the relationship, and the build up to the sex. Thanks so much!

Nice plot but....stepford wife?

I really liked so much about this story but I felt that the woman was denied any character at all. The man just told her what to do and it was always correct, like he was omnicient. Im sorry but that really turned me off.

Great Read!!****

Thanks for a very entertaining story. Great piece of writing.

Loved it !

Nice build-up - enjoyed the gradual emergence and development of their business partnership and the sex seemed so very natural after that. A lovely story with a sweet ending !