Sales Team

why not

10 stars for this outstanding non hooker tale????

Lovely Story

Well written, well constructed and well enjoyed.
Please write more.

Outstanding!

...wasn't ready for the story to end. Well-played.

Damnit!

French people do not speak english like that!

What? The story? It's an awesome piece, why?

:p

bonjour

oui

Wonderful!

What more can be said. One of the very best.

few stories

rate a five star*****,; this is one of those stories.
most are 3 or less stars. maybe 15% are 4 stars.
the inflated ratings mean this one should be 10 stars **********

outstanding

rates right up there with FOOL ME ONCE. without ballot stuffers.
no nude sluts at a cabin, or in a pool, nor was it a hooker fetish, or a limp wrist boston to bmgham..
mostly not a wwimmppyy radk
5 stars and bot one less.

THE MORAL HERE IS

if you find something great. don't let it get away. TK U MLJ LV NV

Superb

Excellent writing, well crafted and with a pace and characters far above the usual. Thank you for the treat of this beautifully prepared and plated offering (to keep in the food /cooking motif!).

A Great Story!

I love this story. This is one of the best.

5 Stars

quite a tale

Never read this before although it has been flagged as a tagged story. It's a feel good tale

*****

Fantabulous! Loved it! Excellent reading. Emotional story. Good sentence structure. Good punctuation. Good plot. Good Show! Cheers!

Love it!

Well written and very sexy!

the best

of the best, currently. 5 stars **********

The best yet

This story is the best story I've read since I first found out about literotica. I mean just wonderful and to make things even better is that there wasn't even that much sex in here and even less detail. I would re-read this story multiple times and enjoy it every time. Please please please write more either as an add on to this story or as other pieces of literotica literature. 5 STARS

concur with

BEST YET
5************s

Very enjoyable read!

Fantastic

Thank you for a very well written and in my opinion realistic story!

Great story

Well written and great characters.

Wow

Best story I've read in a long long time. Perfect balance
of real life and life in bed. Thank you for your time to write.

(I think it's, "I was shaken.")

WOW

All I can say is, "WOW!". It was truly a remarkably written story. There's one problem though... this thing belongs in a real published book! I feel that it being on this site doesn't give it justice. I expect some cheezy erotic novel, with a minimal amount of character developement on here. This exceded that expectation, and is truly in a class of it's own. Hell, they could make this into a movie, using the former boyfriend (or was it husband?) as a main antagonist. He was the only thing that caught me slightly off guard. I'm not so sure you'd get fired from your significant other being an a$$hole. That plausibility of her backstory is the only thing that kind of bothered me. I'm pretty sure after threatning to kill everyone in the office, that legal action would of been taken and he would've been thrown in jail. Maybe i'll have to reread that part again for clarity. Anyways, bravo again on a superbly written story.

this is in the

top 5 of the stories I have read on LW. Also top 5 writers I have read.
so 2 top fives deserve 5 *****s,,*****s
Thanks for the non cuck,, non tears in ur beer, slut wives at cabin, etc tail.
FIVE STARS *****s

bugger--no 5 plus

nice story---sniff now where are those damn tissues

Amazing.

Whenever I have a bad day, I read this story and it gives me hope for all good things in the world again... Thank you.

Just discovered this

Well-written, excellent story. Really enjoyed it. Five stars.

YEP 5 STARS AND I ENJOYED IT

simply my favorite

Just heart-warming and nicely written. I read it every few months when things get me down. Instantly lifts my sprits.

Absolutely Wonderful

A truly moving story -- perhaps the best I've ever read on Literotica. Really, really great.

Loved it!

Well crafted and well written! Thanks for an engaging story which had me sucked in and enjoying the story as it unfolded to its lovely ending.

A really good story

Just the kind of story that lift your spirit, please continue to write. Your a natural.thank you, i feel good just reading this. Top 5 rating from me.

5 stars isn't enough

absolutely enjoyed it, thank you

Different

Finally, a wonderfully written story from Literotica that would be suitable for people who might look askance at some of your other stories! It was a fabulous love story.

EXCELLENTE

outstanding,,, better than 98k% of the so called tales written by so called writers to date.
5 stars*****************

Thanks for a lovely story of people who care

Your story is of the quality of Romance story That you should continue to write with such quality and consider publishing with Harlequin or other such quality Publisher's.
Great story well written.

Sell This

Find a movie producer and sell this. You'll both end up with 5 stars and very enhanced careers

Grade A, Creepy-Free

Love sex, but not a pervert? This is just what the doctor ordered! Thank you Cat5. Yeah, I know sex sells; but talent is so much more enjoyable. The stroke stories are a dime a dozen and soon forgotten. I won't forget this.

Fantastic!

Really enjoyed it. The way it was written drew me in and the characters were easy to relate to. All in all, a well crafted and wonderful story.
BRAVO!

Brings back memories.

It was well whritten and I cared what happened to both early on. I can relate to this story a bit. it didn't work out quite the same. But it did work out. And I think both of us are better for the experiance.

Excellent story ever

My first ever comment for any story because I really admire the writer.

The best story I have ever read, perfectly written. I would love to read many more stories of this writer.

Very nice, keep doing it for us please.

one of a handful of authors

in existence on the literotica site
15 stars for this tale

super story

super story

GREAT STORY

A HAND UP NOT HAND OUT. GRET STORY LOVED THE BEGINNING THE MIDDLE AND REALLY LIKED THE ENDING. VERY WELL WRITTEN AND THE INCREASING LOVE FACTOR MADE IT ALL WORK. 5 STARS NO WAY A LOT MORE THAN THAT. DO YOU HAVE A FOLLOW UP STORY ON THE COUPLE IF NOT YOU SHOULD HAVE IF YOU DO WHAT IS IT CALLED.

RON

LOVED IT

PERFECT

romantic

You are a good story teller.

Thank you

I have a new all time favourite story!

great

Funny heart breaking and loving. A true love story

Unique

Wonderful story of love tenderness and sex. There are only a few of you on this site and boy do your stories stand out. Well done

Amazing. 5/5 easy. Would have loved to see an epilogue though or maybe just a small extra chapter of their wedding night/honeymoon or something. It ended on a mountain top but I would have just loved it even more if it stayed there for a while to enjoy the view, you know?

Anyway - thanks alot for the story :)

Best literotica story ever

Usually I'm more into longer stories multi chartered stories but this story is the best on ever. It has perfect amount of romance sex humor business so tht one doesn't supersede the other. KEEP WRITING STORIES!!!! 10/5 stars