I love this story!
You write it all the feelings inside one tale. Charity, love, honesty and hope (and a little lust)!
This story needs a sequel telling how is they life working as a married couple.
5* for you!
Great Job!
I thought this was a btb story. Should be in romance not loving wives. No cheating, etc. Beautiful rescue beautiful relationship. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you.
My third time reading this story, and I love it more each time. And it made me cry again. Great combination of real romance and great sex. Keep it coming!
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Anonymous10/01/16
Wonderful! Thank you. Jntiques
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Anonymous10/04/16
great great great great!
This is definitely one of the best Romance stories I have read here. The Romance makes the story more enjoyable but I would like to Read another chapter of the story perhaps one where they are on the road to their Wedding.
I HAPPENED TO READ THIS ONE EARLIER BUT WHEN I COME ACROSS THIS ONCE AGAIN IT REFRESHED MY MEMORY OF A GOOD READING I HAD.AND TEMPTED TO READ AGAIN. ONE OF THE MANY VERY GOOD STORIES I HAVE READ.
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Anonymous11/13/16
A Berry good Story
A Berry good Story!CB1E
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Anonymous11/25/16
Wonderful story
Wonderful story. Keep it up. I would like to to say that i really enjoyed reading your story and i would also like to read your other stories. I really enjoyed 100%
I don't know what it is about this story that compels someone ordinarily attracted almost exclusively to stories in the incest/taboo section, but this story checks all my boxes as to what a great story should be.
Romance, conflict, love, togetherness, and of course, sex.
All mixed together with a dash of hope, a spoonful of warmth, and a pinch of laughter.
This has to be one of the few stories on here that I would not mind paying a pretty penny for. (coming from me, that's high praise.)
Overall, a great story and one that sets the bar pretty high for imitators. I wish I could rate higher than 5 stars.
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Anonymous12/22/16
Amazing
Without question or doubt, this is the best Romantic story on this site and in the top ten of all the stories in all categories!
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Anonymous12/26/16
to great to put down
I started reading this and as the plot thickened between the two characters I found that no matter how hard I tried to stop reading,even to go for a cup of coffee, I continued on. This story was well written in a way that keeps your interest. I enjoyed reading this immensely.I have read many stories on this sight, but this is the only one that I have ever given a 5 rating to. Thank you for the great story
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Anonymous01/04/17
One of the best
In my favorites. I have read this story numerous times and enjoy it each time a little more. If I am not mistaken it is in L W myself I think it should be in Romance. I would like to see a follow up story on these two people. 5. Stars plus
Ron/cowboyridecc@yahoo.com
Pretty sure this is my favorite story on this site. Wish the author was still contributing...
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Anonymous02/05/17
me too
I have read this a couple of times. It never fails to charm me. Well written, and a real imaginative tale, with a great balance of lust and warmth. Also a favorite of mine.
He took a chance on someone down and it paid off for both - the sex scenes were great but not the center piece. I'd not be surprised if this author had sold software or been an implementation specialist in the past. Great job!
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Anonymous02/09/17
visualization
I felt like I was with both of you throughout the story. Only gifted writers can do that. As I read, I was with you; I could see you in my mind. Congratulations
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Anonymous02/11/17
Well done Cat5!
A good story I hope that the author can do more stories. It is was believable throughout. It is captivating, delayed what I was intending to do finish reading it.
I fell in love with this story the first time I ever read it. Now it's I my "Favorites List" so that I can read it whenever I want to. Thanks, Cat5; great job!
A couple meet, learn to work together, are courteous, respect each other, and then fall in love.
Thanks for a well written short story documenting a romance.
Fantastic!
I love this story!
You write it all the feelings inside one tale. Charity, love, honesty and hope (and a little lust)!
This story needs a sequel telling how is they life working as a married couple.
5* for you!
Great Job!
Swikedy awtastic!!!
I love this story!! Nothing else to say about this.....really.... Nothing can sum it up better!! Good job....keep up the good work!!👍
Crying
I thought this was a btb story. Should be in romance not loving wives. No cheating, etc. Beautiful rescue beautiful relationship. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you.
Awesome, Again!!!
My third time reading this story, and I love it more each time. And it made me cry again. Great combination of real romance and great sex. Keep it coming!
Wonderful! Thank you. Jntiques
great great great great!
This is definitely one of the best Romance stories I have read here. The Romance makes the story more enjoyable but I would like to Read another chapter of the story perhaps one where they are on the road to their Wedding.
Very well presented
Very Unique Story
Well written. Smooth flowing story. Great presentation. Very enjoyable reading.
SALES TEAM
I HAPPENED TO READ THIS ONE EARLIER BUT WHEN I COME ACROSS THIS ONCE AGAIN IT REFRESHED MY MEMORY OF A GOOD READING I HAD.AND TEMPTED TO READ AGAIN. ONE OF THE MANY VERY GOOD STORIES I HAVE READ.
A Berry good Story
A Berry good Story!CB1E
Wonderful story
Wonderful story. Keep it up. I would like to to say that i really enjoyed reading your story and i would also like to read your other stories. I really enjoyed 100%
wonderful
An absolutely *wonderful* heart-warming story. Write more stories! You have a magnificent gift that should be shared with the world.
One of the best stories. Great characters.
One of the finest stories here IMO.
I don't know what it is about this story that compels someone ordinarily attracted almost exclusively to stories in the incest/taboo section, but this story checks all my boxes as to what a great story should be.
Romance, conflict, love, togetherness, and of course, sex.
All mixed together with a dash of hope, a spoonful of warmth, and a pinch of laughter.
This has to be one of the few stories on here that I would not mind paying a pretty penny for. (coming from me, that's high praise.)
Overall, a great story and one that sets the bar pretty high for imitators. I wish I could rate higher than 5 stars.
Amazing
Without question or doubt, this is the best Romantic story on this site and in the top ten of all the stories in all categories!
to great to put down
I started reading this and as the plot thickened between the two characters I found that no matter how hard I tried to stop reading,even to go for a cup of coffee, I continued on. This story was well written in a way that keeps your interest. I enjoyed reading this immensely.I have read many stories on this sight, but this is the only one that I have ever given a 5 rating to. Thank you for the great story
One of the best
In my favorites. I have read this story numerous times and enjoy it each time a little more. If I am not mistaken it is in L W myself I think it should be in Romance. I would like to see a follow up story on these two people. 5. Stars plus
Ron/cowboyridecc@yahoo.com
absolutely
one of the "a few excellent tales" on this site
Cute
This was actually a really amazing story, and adorable from start to end. You somehow made a sexy story have a plot and that's really great
I must be a romantic at heart.
Well, written...interesting story...brought out my romantic side.
fantastic
My favorite story in all of literotica.
I agree
Pretty sure this is my favorite story on this site. Wish the author was still contributing...
me too
I have read this a couple of times. It never fails to charm me. Well written, and a real imaginative tale, with a great balance of lust and warmth. Also a favorite of mine.
A very sweet story
He took a chance on someone down and it paid off for both - the sex scenes were great but not the center piece. I'd not be surprised if this author had sold software or been an implementation specialist in the past. Great job!
visualization
I felt like I was with both of you throughout the story. Only gifted writers can do that. As I read, I was with you; I could see you in my mind. Congratulations
Well done Cat5!
A good story I hope that the author can do more stories. It is was believable throughout. It is captivating, delayed what I was intending to do finish reading it.
Outstanding!!!
I fell in love with this story the first time I ever read it. Now it's I my "Favorites List" so that I can read it whenever I want to. Thanks, Cat5; great job!
MP
It's nice to read a genuine love story
A couple meet, learn to work together, are courteous, respect each other, and then fall in love.
Thanks for a well written short story documenting a romance.
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