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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/28/05

Separation

Good tale of separation of a person from society and family.
Only the child has any regard.
Almost missed the fact that the flies had two legs!

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by Wanton Vixxxen04/29/05

With or without music, ishtat...

this is a wonderful folk tale! But I would love to hear the music that went with this story - perhaps an audio with poetry could be made, hmmm? Regardless - this was a delight to read and envision in My mind's eye. You have such a way with combining words into just the right dosages - like a poetry pharmacist Great work as always, ishtat.

Vixxx

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