All Comments on 'Vanilla Essence'

by Marie Marshall

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Very Hot Dom

It's funny how we can find amusement at ourselves when others are taking us and their game very seriously. The story is hot and one I can relate to as the Dom. I agree, we only perform fetish for those we love and then get off later on our own, in private. I look forward to many more of your writings. You speak to me. Thanx. Love, Lindy

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Not spicy enough for sub/dom

While I really enjoy stories in which one woman is in charge, if it drags on too long without either some sensual ass spanking or physical attraction (kissing, caressing, etc.) of some kind it gets dull pretty quick. While I like this writer's style I felt that this story lacked that active element. The dominant girl just didn't seem very confident as to what to do next with her submissive slavegirl.

lalailalaialmost 19 years ago
Hot little story

And very funny too. LOL.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
I really did

love this

Great writing!

Fact that you're British made it even better x

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