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Darkness, like syrup

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/29/05

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The first two stanzas are awesome, very visual and unique.

excellent title!
seattle rain

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by Bridget6904/30/05

Very erotic images...

that stick to the mind like syrup.

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by evilfairy03/13/07

Very sexy

Like syryp.....just gorgeous imagery...
A very erotic write

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by KOLKORE01/10/08

I could read more of this kind...

I loved the imagery. You should write poems more often.

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by Amyfriend10/30/08

Mmmm, very sweet

and so sexy with some beautiful images being conjured up for my own vivid imagination.

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