You have constructed a wonderfully vicious protagonist. His cold-blooded abduction and domination are breathtaking. Looking forward to more of the story.
Thanks!
by
Anonymous05/05/05
Much 2 Big
EGO and head that is - decent writting - skills should improve with maturity.
Inspired by or inspirering more mexican kidnappers?
by
Anonymous05/22/05
Great stuff!
Last review seems to have been the musings of a moron with his own self-esteem issues. Hot story! Mas por favor!
by
Anonymous12/31/05
Disappointed.
Not as imaginative as the original story.
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Anonymous08/21/06
Surprising
The dark themes of this stroy are normally too abrasive for my taste, wonder why I continued the read...got off on it wonderfully. Muchas Gracias Estaban!
English
Wow!!!
Snr.
You have constructed a wonderfully vicious protagonist. His cold-blooded abduction and domination are breathtaking. Looking forward to more of the story.
Thanks!
Much 2 Big
EGO and head that is - decent writting - skills should improve with maturity.
Inspired by or inspirering more mexican kidnappers?
Great stuff!
Last review seems to have been the musings of a moron with his own self-esteem issues. Hot story! Mas por favor!
Disappointed.
Not as imaginative as the original story.
Surprising
The dark themes of this stroy are normally too abrasive for my taste, wonder why I continued the read...got off on it wonderfully. Muchas Gracias Estaban!
Fuckin' ass
That's all I have to say.
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