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Yes, I agree...
that for reasons other than to sustain life do we breathe and that type of breathing - for another - is as vital to staying alive as the unconscious reflex one. You effectively expressed throughout this piece the overwhelming loss of love felt as I, too, held My breath with you. Thank you for this powerfully penned work.
Vixxx
I
Found this an outstanding
piece of poetry, a piece
filled with metaphors and
accurate discriptions of
pain felt through love.
I felt this poem and it was
a pleasure to read.
Thank you
~ J
mentioned
this poem was mentioned on the thread "new Poems Reviews"
This poem...
was breath taking in its pondering about the purposes of life, during times when we view it as nothing more than an automatic function. Very thought provoking!
Hits SO close ...
... to my emotional home. Very well done. Thanks! ~Imp
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