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by Anonymous

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by CupidsGurl04/30/05

Lonley~

Yes.
One is a very lonley number.
Great imagery. Feel your hope in there too.
More Plez~

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by twelveoone04/30/05

*

as is;
is perfect,
I think

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by WickedEve04/30/05

this is kind of an odd

little poem (and sad) and that's one of the reasons I like it.

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by Anonymous04/30/05

1 is the loneliest #

This has a bitter-sweet ring to it, a wry smile. I like it very much.

Tess

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by My Erotic Tail04/30/05

mentioned

this poem was menioned on the thread "New Poems Reviews"

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by ozymandiask04/30/05

Renewal?

Sad yes, but there is the beginning of a renewal of life hinted at too . Next time I imagine her ordering a large piece of chocolate cake .

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by Bridget6905/01/05

Sad...

when the other half of your life is gone, and you must accustom yourself to doing things on your own.

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by Wanton Vixxxen05/01/05

The lonely soul...

struggles with the simple things in life that we take for granted when there are two to enjoy them together. As always, ishtat, you pen such interesting and unique topics and come out shining in the end

Vixxx

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by LeBroz03/17/08

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The hint of times more pleasant make this all the more poignant.

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by LeBroz03/28/08

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This poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 39,000 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.



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