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Life after Death Ch. 03

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/10/05

short, but nice transition

nice transition from memories to present chapter, if short.

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by fakers5105/10/05

A good start

Since this is chapter 3, will there be more as the Vet come into his life?

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by gizzmo30105/10/05

Good

A good story, this is a nice chapter, showing the moving away from the loss of his wife to getting back in the swing of things. and the promise of a new love

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by bruce2205/11/08

Thanks for a interesting story.

The subject matter is fascinating. I enjoy reading it
but there are one or two rough spots. Not just words that
sound like the ones you want to write.

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