All Comments on 'Life after Death Ch. 03'

by Executive Gent

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Anonymousalmost 19 years ago

short, but nice transition

nice transition from memories to present chapter, if short.

fakers51 almost 19 years ago

A good start

Since this is chapter 3, will there be more as the Vet come into his life?

gizzmo301 almost 19 years ago

Good

A good story, this is a nice chapter, showing the moving away from the loss of his wife to getting back in the swing of things. and the promise of a new love

bruce22 almost 16 years ago

Thanks for a interesting story.

The subject matter is fascinating. I enjoy reading it

but there are one or two rough spots. Not just words that

sound like the ones you want to write.

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