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A Melt

byKaishaku©
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by CupidsGurl05/02/05

Mmmm~

Yummy if ya ask me~~!!!
Now where did ya hide mine? Hmmmmmmmm~~~~~~~
*Big Smiles*
Wonderful poem. Loved your imagery.
I can see that melt sittin right here in front of me..
Mmmm smell it too.

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by twelveoone05/02/05

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cheddar, enuff with the food

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by duckiesmut05/02/05

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Are you buying us all breakfast?

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by Bridget6905/03/05

A delicious weaving...

of culinary offerings.

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by Anonymous05/03/05

Your poetry.....

...about food is delicious! This one is no exception.

Tess

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by annaswirls05/09/05

cheeeese!

I don't know how I missed so much of your poetry, but now I found it I won't miss much if any!

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by LeBroz12/15/06

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A yummy write
Made me think of Wendy's, or is it Burger King,
And a delicious cheddar melt.

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by duddle14612/19/06

delectible

A poem about food. Is it too late to go out for a pizza?
I love person who talks to themselves ~ about nutrition.

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by Amyfriend02/12/07

It made me hungry...

but at least I now know what I'm doing for supper..thanks.

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