by MINKX
A poor knock off of a poor show. Buffy is over done. This looks like it was written by a 12 y/o trying to sound erotic and comes off sounding lame. It is not much better than the other crap you write. Stick with poetry at least it is half way decent.
Goodness what a nasty thing to write, i think your story was good, it could have been better but dont let that person put you down so harshly. the sex was good, it certainly turned me on. keep writing,with each story you will get better and better.
xox
Don't listen to the 1st whatever, they are full of shit, and wouldn't know a good story if it bit them on the ass! I've read pretty many Buffy/celebrity erotic stories and this one was the best!
sex with spike? Just show me the crypt! He can bite me any day of the week and twice on sunday! Great story I thought you got the characters we all know and love across brilliantly.
And To "Anonymous" in Uk
If you don't like Buffy stories heres an idea for you; Don't bloody read them!
and if you stand firm on your childish and pathetic comments at least have the balls to sign them or has a vampire bitten them off?
I Loved your Story Snap
Jennifer C
My Name Proudly signed!
Baby you have fans! They like what you write! Dont let the one sour apple spoil your talents! They are nasty and obviously not getting anything sexually so take it out on people with more talent than they wil ever have!
I miss Buffy so much and you did a great job of capturing the old charactors.