All Comments on 'Stepping Out with Steph Ch. 03'

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bigrimmstalesbigrimmstalesalmost 16 years ago
it got to the action a bit quick...

I expected more seduction of the mother. it was a bit too twee for me how she went from Piper Laurie character (Carrie) to wanton fuck slut.

bigrimmstalesbigrimmstalesalmost 16 years ago
yep, still not enough emotion

and that is why it was twee. Wow, I had the same image of Piper Laurie the God-pushing, bible puncher, turning to a turd punched slut. It was a great idea but done without enough finesse. Take your time, seduce her, create scenarios where she is tempted more and more into debauchery. Now that would have been wonderful story-telling. I wanted her corrupted but teasingly. Not, 'o and suddenly all her clothes fell off!'

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