by Imagetaker
Lucky Lady! different type of poetry for me. Great imagery.
Keep up the great work!
in the chair as I read this poem in the form of a story. This seductive work is a step beyond what we normally see in poetry; nevertheless, it is as mellifluous as slow, steamy, sultry jazz. Great work!
I liked this a lot. It flowed nicely and kept me breathless for more. I hope you'll write more.
This is an example of very sensual writing.It's left me & my fiancee both very horny. When we are 16000 miles apart that presents a problem.Lol.
that I'm the woman in the chair ....even if it's in your imagination, dear.
To hold on... write some more! Yor write erotica and that's so much better than pornography... Very nice work!
now that is one hot poem with delicious sensual images portrayed.. Loved it.
Well, Darling........ I feel like I was there. Oh, wait a minute....... I was! I love this....brought back magic memories.......jane
mmmm please i want that come and get me !! i will share the taste
of me on my fingers.