All Comments on 'Bi 3-way'

This is a story about male gay sex. I wouldn't have read it if it was correctly titled, but now that I have, I can say that it's fairly well written. The grammar is good, syntax acceptable. Writing style is mediocre though, little is written that draws the reader into the scenes. There is insufficient description throughout; the story could have been greatly expanded. Who were those old celebs? Was one Nollie Harrison, Rex' son? What's he up to these days? How was the men's room panelled?

There is enough latent material to write substance with this plot.

C-.

Anyway, back to class for this writer.

louienohio Get a grip The title says it all..learn to read & move on fool this is not the darkagaes FOOL!

Great story! Needed some anal.