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quickie
I have about 5 seconds to check out the new poems today. I decided your poem was the one I had time to click on. If it had sucked, you would have been in trouble. lol I'm coming back later to read it again. I like what I had time to absorb.
You poem....
...has been mentioned in the review thread - May 3
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Oh, wow, from a sigh
Not her name,
only the glow.
to a scream
this slut fucking bitch who dreams of being stopped
This is incredible,
I really don't think anything will stop you.
Very powerfull, I am in awe.
passion thread
Thanks :)
I should have mentioned this is from the passion thread, a spin off of Mister Carrington's Passion poem that had some slut hanging from your neck by her thighs like a necklace.
I am pretty sure it is the one that caused the multiple orgasmatic poem stream by fly and tess. ?
anna
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This poem is like getting dumped by a big wave .You can see it coming ,you know it's good but you get bowled over anyway - and then you have to keep coming back.
You have to warn Me...
the next time you write one of these 'catch you off guard and knock you down' type of poems, anna! The phrase that clotheslined Me was, "Sex and shiver of the sexual being that moves beauty to its side for a clear view of its closest companion". Dammit girl! You own the joint with this piece! Uhmmm...do I have to tell you its My favorite work of the day?
Vixxx
I gave it a 5
everything else has been said.
~Syn
high 5 all the way.....
what else can i say.......it has all been said to this point...nicely done......don
No One
...is stopping you. Incredible write.
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