All Comments on 'His Awakening'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Awesome

I have no idea whether or not the grammer is correct - who cares - the story was captivating. Had me longing for my teenage years and thinking about a woman I knew - but sure not that well. Keep them coming!!!!

dreamingjeannedreamingjeannealmost 19 years ago
I really liked

your imagery. How you described her heat was very good! A fantasy this older woman has had for a long time! Give us more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
awesome

great story. will there be a part 2?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
It was okay

I loved the story of a younger guy with an older woman..but it needed more story to it...

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Nice so far...

Nice build up. Need another story to finish this young man off. Would she let him fuck her hairy pussy in the pool? Then later she dresses for him only in lingerie with high heel sandals. Her silky nylons are wide topped and almost touch her lips. She tells him to watch and jack off as she gives him a wonderful show. He almost cums as she slids her black sheer shimmery stocking up her leg glancing at him side ways as she fastens her silver garter buckle. His hand is moving up and down like crazy with ease as the Astroglide lubes his cock so good...ect ect ect

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
great story

I really like the story, but it definitly needs a part 2! Will he have sex with her in the pool right after that amazing experience?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Thought you must be a woman

Hey pal, this piece read like it was written by a woman. Well done, and let's see more!

Dougie

gunshotglitter77gunshotglitter77almost 17 years ago
I seriously need you to write more

I know this story is like 2 years old, but i just read it and loved it. made my stomach quiver, need more, you can't just leave us hanging like that!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Awesome story!

One of the most enjoyable stories that I have read on this website!

I like "older woman" stories to begin with, and this one was great. I appreciated the foreplay, the lack of crude terms for sexual activities and body parts the gentleness of what took place.

More, more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
wtf??!?!??!?!?!?!?!

18 year old with a 40 year old?!?!?!?!?!? thats just sick and wrong...

PamrodPamrodabout 9 years ago
Coming off age!

I think he was a very lucky guy! If anyone gets such a nice introduction to a woman's body and pleasure of sex what more can you say?

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