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by Anonymous

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by twelveoone05/03/05

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nicely done, like the formating

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by Wanton Vixxxen05/03/05

From the foods for the belly...

you bring us now to the appetite of forbidden love. In those few words you took Me to the hunger of his erotic yearnings - her. Another of your delightful cuisines to be devoured by the images you penned here today. A sizzling, spicy hot write, K!
Now I'm starving.

Voracious Vixxx

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by Anonymous05/04/05

*****

mentioned in May 3rd reviews.

Tess

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by annaswirls05/09/05

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raised 2 levels with the last line. very nice

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by Anonymous05/02/12

Another 5 star poem!

Love the line breaks!

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