All Comments on 'Breathless'

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My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Talealmost 19 years ago
haiku rotic

tiny breath

Bridget69Bridget69almost 19 years ago
So much passion...

expressed here, in just one small breath.

Honey123Honey123almost 19 years ago
sexy

little poem....very nice

~honey

matriarchmatriarchalmost 19 years ago
perfectly

describes the effect of your words. xx

Jennifer CJennifer Calmost 19 years ago
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Short but very sweet

Hot little poem!

Great

~ J

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Sexual Hiaku

Not easy to do...

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