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two lines, jump out.
Tarintino wrote this scene
secret undercover super hero fucker
kick the shit out of you, yes they do.
Uncertain
Not sure about the last stanza but also not sure why. The remainder was really grab me and pay attention stuff
fuck yes
very good words, the kind that get my attention. I love your writing. Good to see ya!
~Syn
That last verse
is great and, to me, ties it all together.
Great job
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