All Comments on 'Tyrone’s Gambit'

by Moonshine57

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Good story...

and the only thing missing was quotation dialogue...which to me would have maade for a better and longer read. 5*

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Just how often do these woman go to these parties where there are strippers and cheat on there husbands. A friends cousin was a stripper in nyc and they would do private parties and shows all over. He said he never did a show or party where he didn’t fuck one or more woman and 99% of the time they were married. He also said 99 out of a 100 times he would talk them into letting him have there ass. He said he fucked plenty of friends mothers and people he knew from where he lived. He’s also had multiple woman from the same families. . He did a lot with this guy he worked with who was black and was telling us how they fucked his best friends mother and her married oldest daughter in the same room switching back and forth. He loved to be verbally abusing and tormenting to the white woman . He said at one point they dped the mother than the daughter with his black friend in there ass both times. He had a crazy run for years and was still doing it until he met someone who couldn’t get serious with him unless he stopped so he did . He said at a family function of her family’s he met an aunt of hers from nj who was at a party of a coworker who got fucked by one of the guys not him but he was there. They spoke privately and he said he wouldn’t tell a soul and she had nothing to worry about. Now married for a while with kids he realizes how fucked up he was for fucking married woman and feels very bad about it and he never let his wife attend a party or place where there was male strippers. He told her of his past and said they all start out saying never me but drinks and peer pressure and others doing it right in front of you even some of the most loyal have caved

AnnetteBishopAnnetteBishopover 5 years ago
Hot story

Love hot BBC who aren’t afraid to make some $$$. Xoxoxo Annette

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Omg my dick has gotten so hard reading this. Kts bad that I thought kf hiw I'm sure the author had an erection when writinf this. I want and need more. This is definitely awesome beyond measures. Tyrone could indeed be me, Ru

Moonshine57Moonshine57almost 3 years agoAuthor

A little background on this story. Tyrone is actually a character in my book, Tangled Web; Secrets Unveiled, (by Gene Moon) which was finally released in November of 2020. Since he is a villain in the book, I decided to write a story about him, to develop the character more fully.

Tangled Web; Secrets Unveiled is available on most online sites that carry books, in paperback and electronic formats. Please do check it out.

ronibarretronibarret5 months ago

a great evolution for your protagonist.

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