I think the story merits continuation, although one slight mistake might have been telegraphing that Kelly & the sister broke up. Perhaps that could be fixed in the "present" day? I'd love to see how it turns out though, keep up the good work!
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Anonymous07/05/05
great erotica
great stories.. one mistake already pointed outabout Sandra and Kelly breaking up but hopefully it will be remedied .. the stories were very erotic and keep me "up" the entire time... waiting anxiously for the next one
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Anonymous07/23/05
Two for One Ch.6
Enjoyed the whole story so far, please write more chapters.
this is a good story so far and I want to see hm knock up his sister too. then Kelly can move out with her baby and he and sister can stay together with their child since you already telegraphed their break up.
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Anonymous09/20/05
Excellent series
I enjoyed each installment. Hope you will continue the story line.
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Anonymous01/27/07
Not Finished
Story was not finished.
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Anonymous01/24/09
Good but.
For my reading pleasure, not enough kissing of his sister, and he hasn't had her ass yet. Please write more.
Just love the whole series. Don't listen to the commenters who criticised you for taking the story where you have gone, (i.e. pregnancy, anal sex etc). It's your story and as far as I'm concerned, you're doing great.
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Anonymous12/22/15
More cum please
Keep it up just like in your stories, maybe add another female like a niece would be exciting!!!
English
Please, could we have some more?
I'm enjoying the heck out of this wish-fulfillment masterpiece. Please, do give us another chapter or three.
Is Rachel fertile?
Does Sandra really want to have a child, as well?
Will our hero marry Kelly (or Rachel), just to make things more "respectable"?
And... what about Naomi?
More, More, More!!!!!!!
Great fun. Well written. Lot's of imagination. Looking forward to the next chapters.
The heat of the series
I think the story merits continuation, although one slight mistake might have been telegraphing that Kelly & the sister broke up. Perhaps that could be fixed in the "present" day? I'd love to see how it turns out though, keep up the good work!
great erotica
great stories.. one mistake already pointed outabout Sandra and Kelly breaking up but hopefully it will be remedied .. the stories were very erotic and keep me "up" the entire time... waiting anxiously for the next one
Two for One Ch.6
Enjoyed the whole story so far, please write more chapters.
Continue Please!
this is a good story so far and I want to see hm knock up his sister too. then Kelly can move out with her baby and he and sister can stay together with their child since you already telegraphed their break up.
Excellent series
I enjoyed each installment. Hope you will continue the story line.
Not Finished
Story was not finished.
Good but.
For my reading pleasure, not enough kissing of his sister, and he hasn't had her ass yet. Please write more.
please continue
very exciting series, please continue. You've opened up a whole new storyline....not that the 5 prior were boring by any means.
Sweeeeettttt......
I'm really enjoying this story for a number of reasons.... When you got it you got it...
nice
STOP THE MADNESS AND CONTINUE THE STORY
Really? You had a great story going and then one of them gets pregnant? Ruined it for me...won't even go to the next chapter.
Great work
Just love the whole series. Don't listen to the commenters who criticised you for taking the story where you have gone, (i.e. pregnancy, anal sex etc). It's your story and as far as I'm concerned, you're doing great.
More cum please
Keep it up just like in your stories, maybe add another female like a niece would be exciting!!!
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