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mention
your poem has been mentioned in today's reviews
Sacred and profane....
....blended seamlessly as only SR could do and that's no sin.
Tess
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OMG
"oiled thighs"
I don't like this, seems a little too much thigh oilin' goin on, consider "anointed"
"You want to be my god
and I kneel before you
knowing the moment I kiss your feet,
they will walk away"
this is good, again feel it could be a little better - Repent Woman
Other than that, wow, maybe a little too strong for my tastes, (but then everyone knows how refined I am)
Better than 100, not quite the killer it could be.
sisters in sin
this is a glorious poem!
enjoyed the sinfulness
of this piece. sin is nice.........*LOL*.....nice work too.........don
Sacriligiously sinful stuff!
And you brought out all the decadent debaucherous best of it, Rain! Might as well pull out all the stops, woman - we'll be talking about this one all together in the same place anyway! lol Kidding aside, this was a very different SeattleRain goes thunder and lightning and brimstone kind of piece - and Wanton Vixxxen goes WOW!!! over it.
So much
here to see and ponder.
I like oiled thighs because it ties in nicely with the polished wood you find in a church.
I remember the confessional and how many times it would spark the most cruel and sinful thoughts once locked inside it.
And I like the end where it's the struggle between earthly and spiritual things.
One god who will be there always and yet, one who offers fulfillment of what you need now, but once you ask, he in essence leaves.
Great work
and good to see you back
Seattle
You are simply evil!
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