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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/04/05

mention

your poem has been mentioned in today's reviews

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by Anonymous05/04/05

You just.....

...get better and better. Minimalism works well here.

Tess

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by Anonymous05/04/05

this is my title

this is terrific. send it out, get it published or something :)

or not, just a suggestion.
~annaswirls

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by twelveoone05/05/05

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I am a fan, I am not fond of these two lines, I feel, somehow that they could be better, to match the rest of this.
as a weight of
two worlds

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