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by Anonymous10/23/07

Before attempting to write about soccer in the UK it would help to research the language normally used within the sport and the country. Clearly, this was not done and the resulting immaturity of approach spoils the story

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by Anonymous09/01/14

Get it right, please

Sent me OFF

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by Anonymous07/06/15

"Cultured Australian accent(s)"??

Really?

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by Anonymous04/20/16

"peaked my interest" ?

"peaked my interest" ? Your English teacher would be disappointed at your mis-spelling of "piqued."

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