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fantastic!
beautiful writing.
wonderful!!!!!!!!
It was well written and fast-paced. Love your writing style
Awsome!!!
don't stop, cont... the story, to good to stop now.
This was so good!!!!!
You are now on my list of favorite authors. You know once and a while I'll read something on Literotica that is so damn good. I just really appreciate writers like you. You are very original and very talented. Thanks for taking the time to write. I hope you continue with this story because baby--it is damn good!!!!
i love this stuff
that was a damn fine peice of work keep it up love your style ill be taking cues from you form now on
Romantic + Xmen story
This story makes perfect sense when you listen to Iron Butterfly while reading it.
Fire and Ice, sex and action, good start to a series!
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