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Cute and clever... I loved this line:
Clothes will fly in a tornado surprise,
wearing nothing but seduction.
Thank you for the journey..
Du~
Great!
Nice little poem. I love this line:
wearing nothing but seduction.
Good words.
Very good!
A light and brezzy
poem with some craking
imagery.
Loved it.
~ J
wow
nice work Art...Sabina
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GOOD!! I like how some lines have rhymeing in themselves. An other good one!!
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Yee-Hah
Art, note comment below mine
whad i say?
This thing does not have a dime's worth of pretension in it,
a good thing, a very good thing
Fuck it, a double Yee-Hah
Swirling images...
that blow away the mind.
from your
great poem and great time doing it so that poem could come to life. lol
love always,
nin-
Awww....
"She'll blow you a kiss, from lucious lips,
winking an eye."
thanks for the sentiment and the lines Arty babe...too funny since i always sign with a kiss!
Love ya,
Kisses...
Lucious
You're a survivor...
of a Texas Tornado! You're alive and that's all that matters, Art! Although I DO know it was you that suffered some minor injuries... "Leaving a male, in her wind blown trail, ridden, tattered and torn."...I am sure, in time, you will be strong enough to take on another Texas tornado
this got by me......
and i'm not sure how it did.......i love this little tornado you produced......nicely done........don
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Sounds like a take charge woman
"wearing nothing but seduction;"
By the time you figure out what's happened
She's got your head reelin' in confusion.
texas tornado huh
seems like i've heard this a time or two from you
being a little tornado is just what i do
but this little texas tornado will always love you
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