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Why?
Why do your poems move me the wway they do? A few short lines, and they say a wealth of meaning. Whether writing erotic poetry or straight poetry, you have feelings which stir up my emotions. Well done once again, Jennifer.
Painted Smile.
At times I think your upfront writing shouldn't work but it invariably does.
I was suddenly reminded of the Isley brothers song Behind The Painted Smile.
Now I'm showing my age! *tip toes away embarrassed*
Well done!
Clever poetry
I love how you have expressed that women use make up to cover up more than just their appearance this is very true! I loved your poem and the message it gives out. Cleverly written and it speaks volumes!
Thank you.
K x
Make- up cosmetically...
can hide on the surface what emotions we wish to keep concealed beneath. You have done an excellent job of "applying" the right phrases in the right "shading and tone" of your work here, Jenn. Great idea for a poem's theme!
Vixxx
Our mask begins to take its shape
so true! Moving piece. I like the rhyme and meter very much
I use ....
camoflauge
now thats the opposite of attract or cover up but become invisible
I use ....
camoflauge
now thats the opposite of attract or cover up but become invisible
Very good!
Altering outer appearances to conceal inner feelings. So true!
is a cover....
when it is needed the most. even though i'm not a femme. i can certainly see what one does to alleviate emotional duress. nicely worded......don
Wonderful insight
into the mindplay behind the facade. Great rhythm, i just floated along with the lines. being touched by each one. I like it when a poem paints a picture in the minds eye while you're reading it. i found myself looking in the mirror. Impressive.
You're lucky
that you get to use make-up. Us dudes just have to grin and bare it. I think you could develop this theme with a most delightful outcome. I also think you are being very guarded here. But hey what do I know? I do enjoy your writing.
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