All Comments on 'Sally, Tim have Elderly Neighbours Ch. 01'

This fantasy was told in such a comfortable manner, as if it were a bedside story.

I became so hard on page 1 and it didn't soften on page 4. It still feels that way now several hours later.

I hope the story is continued and will get the best votes which it deserves.

Well done, Mrs Granger.

Well this certainly put a smile on my face! A new story by MaryGranger and the promise of more to come. I've been a fan of Mary's for some time. She has a unique voice. At least I've yet to come across another author who writes like her. Nobody filled her absence! And it's a nice long story that covered almost all of her favorite themes. Incest may have been slighted a little bit but there were some tantalizing hints thrown out concerning Timothy's parents and sister. I hope you bring them into the story in an active role. But, Mary, the important thing is to keep writing. Welcome back!!

What a lovely build up,you really are a top writer Mary. Lovely adult incest referred to early on and then a very sexy introduction with the older sexy neighbours.

Mrs Rose satisfying Sally and then her husband and Mr Rose obtaining satisfaction with both Sally and Mrs Rose. Can`t wait for Sally and her husband to host a sexual meeting with their older mature neighbours. Tremendous writing,giving me a bulge in my trousers,thank you Mary,please write more. Ian xx

Thank you Mary. We are all quite eager for your next installment of this fascinating tale.

I found Mary's previous stories and I'm still working (nearly typed something else then!) through them.

Now I'm pleased to see her up and running again.

This story is fun, well written and arousing. (Sticky knickers again!)

Looking forward to the next episode.

Mary I love the way you write and your very naughty characters am so happy to have a new story and sounds like more coming I too was very excited from the very beginning of the story all the way through it to the point I had to be a naughty boy with myself twice while reading it. Thank you and looking forward to the next installment

Great stuff. Innocence personified.

Sally is a great ingenue lead along by Ann. Timothy, what a Sissy! I can't wait to read about him in stockings and suspenders. Having him on hormones to grow tits will be a blast. How is going to explain this...? What about asking his sister for help...?

I love the story and stroked myself through almost all of it. I hardly can wait for the next installment. In the meantime I'm going to fantasize about it.

Another brilliant piece of work, who could not enjoy this wonderful work of erotica I think these are the most amazing stories on here, Mary more please !!

I have really enjoyed reading these stories and waitveagerly for the next chapters

Mary, what a wonderful story and so well written. I loved the expression 'Camel's Toe and will use it myself. Looking forward to Chapter Two.

Five stars from me. Thank you for your hard work in writing such an exciting story! You have a gift, Mary.

You MUST continue!

Fun, super sexy and so well-written.

More please.

Thank you very much for this outstanding story. It was well worth the time to set the general context. Hoping for Chapter 2!

I would like to thank everyone for the kindly messages of support. I was rather nervous about what sort of response my story would receive as it did use characters from my earlier pages.

I intend to write a second chapter of Sally, but first of all I am hoping to use another of my old fantasies such as Lucille or Mrs Marlow.

Thank you all, once more.

Mary

Well done Mary, A stunningly beautiful story. I love the style and the genuine nature of the characters. You are clearly a very talented writer and your popularity is evident from other readers' comments. It's well written, realistic and erotic.

Thank you.

There must be part II, I cannot wait. This is a great story and gives me great enjoyment

Just the change in dominance / roles in the end sucked.

I think it is the old world type of setting, pretense, and innocence, that caught me. It's like a link of innocence, to fantasy, to reality. It wasn't overly pornographic, just nice.

This story is right up my alley. Well written it speaks to my fantasy and my situation. I'd love to have a younger couple fall into my lap literally and figuratively the way this story played out. I am eager to see the next chapter! Definitely a 5

please write again soon especially about these 4 lovely people. I would so like to be like Tim and have a terrific wife like Sally. You really seemed to capture the minds of these people and especially Tim

Mary , I thought you had given up your naughties , happily this isnt the case and a big " welcome back " .

A unique style , olde world charm and naughty innocence , Great stuff !!

Great you are back Marry! Thanks!!

Mary, your return is very much an early gift of the season. Your writing style is most erotic, as it requires the reader to be much more than a passive voyeur. We are required to pull out and play with so many of our naughtiest, most intimate thoughts, desires and fantasies. What a treasure your writing bestows.

Thank you.

Mary,

I like many others feared that you had deserted us, leaving us high and dry but how delightful that your absence was caused by something we've all suffered from password amnesia. I loved the story of Tim,Sally and their neighbours and can't wait for part 2. You've already hinted at hand interest in Sally so I can see that developing alongside which is the uniform club another outlet for hand tastes I hope.

Keep up the good work can't wait for the next episode

Dick

This story HAS to be autobiographical.

Nonsense that it's fiction, as the opening line seems to claim.

It is real AND Mary at her finest.

The richness of detail, the depth of emotions, and the range of sexuality tell the readers clearly that we are dealing with a sexually promiscuous, avidly experienced English woman.

I've not yet had the honour of masterbating to the stories under her other pen names, but from what your readers write, you are some seriously hot woman.

63 stars, Mary: five for your story; 58 for your Age of Sex.

I loved this story and can't wait to read chapter 2 about the next meeting. I am an older man, but my cock is small. I am wearing a bra and panties as I read this story. I have fantasized for years about having a wife or girlfriend that would help me dress as a woman but never had the nerve to ask. I do hope to see more chapters about this soon.

Hi Mary I just cant seem to get enough. We have emailed a couple times in the past. I had to go back and re read Sally and Tim again and as usual with each and every one of your stories I couldn't keep my hands off myself and had two nice cums while reading it for the second time. I saw your comment that you were going to revisit a couple of your other fantasies before you do part two of this one and your other fantasies are just as yummy as this one so looking forward to all of them. I hope its soon my only questions are how did you get to be so naughty and do you have a sister who is single and available and just as naughty as you? Ray

I loved it. I loved the slow buildup. As I have a rather small cock and have had women (and men) humiliate me sexually I loved your descriptions. I was very aroused. Thank you so much. I wish you had many more stories here.

Thank you!

Your stories just get better and better and this is surely your best

Wonderful build up as we expect from you and then the explosive couplings

Please tell your lovely wife that it's her NIPPLES that are going to get twisted. Yes, hot bitch that she is, pinch and tweak and squeeze and pull - but above all else - TWIST HER NIPPLES whilst tit-fucking her. You may watch, if need be.

My gosh, you are a HOT author, a really HOT one. And if your lovely wife's nipples are anywhere half as good as the stories you write, your lovely wife's tits are going to give me the Orgasm of a Lifetime.

Seven stars: five for the story, and two upon your lovely wife's now well-twisted nipples.

PS. Don't say it's fantasy: one of your readers already told us your stories are autobiographical. Yes, that's right: autobiographical!

Mary, your blossoming obesity is a joy to behold! Admiring your huge legs and ass from behind whilst you walk is a source of admiration and arousal. May your fat cunt lips also grow in proportion, my delicious cunt-whore. You are five-stars-stunning, Mary-bitch!

Ready, willing, and eager to fuck your fat cunt-lips, Mary the Erotic!

Five stars, your obese deliciousness, five stars: one for each stone of weight.

But please no more Andrew and Wendy 😁

How I woild love to br Timohty and have a wife like Sally and to have people net door like the Roses would be perfect. When can we expect the next chapter

A wonderful story

I loved this story and hope you get round to writing further chapters

delightful it would be so lovely to have a wife such as timmy

Amazing, beautiful, wonderful. I want to, NEED TO, hear more. Please

I loved this story which was so softly written. It exuded the atmosphere of an English country village. Thank you for sharing. 5 stars and added to my favourites.

Not normally my kind of story, but so well written and quite erotic. I'm looking forward to the next instalment

Such a very different story, beautifully told , I was hoping for another chapter but I’m not seeing a follow up, it has so much potential it’s a pity . I’m sure the author has her reasons but the acceptance of cross dressing, subtle Dom and the olde world text is fascinating. It unique !!

I love it

A most exciting story that’s so well written. I do so hope you will continue this tantalizing story.