A Biker Fantasy Ch. 03

Love this story and have trouble waiting for it.

I like the thoughts and setting of this story . It is a very creative story. I wait impatienly for each installment. Keep up the good work.

Awsome!!!

Loved it man, can't wait till the next one.

Great new Chapter

Good to see your still working on this one, loved the new chapter, and don't want to wait too long for the next :)

Cheers for a great story

Phil

bout time!

man.. i waited for a loooong time for this. shame there isnt much battle in these 2 chapters. i really look forward for the next 50 chapters:P at that time, u might be dead and me kicking gangsters. congrats on making the time to write it. and plz write the next chaps sooner:)

Do carry on if You've time! Please!

A hell of a tale, the only problem is when's the next installment?

Thanks
John

Where's the sex?? :-)

Awesome story.
Liked it fairly much, but I was missing some graphic content. The way you wrote it you coud sell it to the general market.
No "real" problem with that, but quite franly I was looking for some more explicit sex.
Otherwise I envy your story-telling ability.

Great Story... more sexual commentary???

Hey, I'm loving this series but would really like more sexual commentary. The story is really great! I want to be horny while I read it.

It hit home

My name is Bill and i am a biker. This story hit home with me like no other. Please let bill continue to walk between worlds and as far as not having enough sex in it, i think you had it just right. Fifty more chapters would be enough i think LOL

2 Critiques...

Number one... It is painfully obvious that this story was rushed to conclusion, thereby rendering a gem in the rough into just plain rough.
Number two... Had it been written more like a screen play, the reader would be clamoring for more. Ditch the first person, I and Me. Just write a story.

not bad not bad at all. thank you

enjoyed your tale reminded me a bit of fire margins. a paper back i picked up at the library once, would love to see more of this world and the "hunter". Angel*49

A very interesting story but...

This was a very interesting story and was well put together. The only problem with it was that it was way too short. With your writing style you could turn this into an on-going series. I don't remeber the title but I read a novel about a world-walker whos sole purpose was to travel between worlds and change their histories. I am looking forward to seeing you continue with your story. WOLFMANN

thank you

I have loved this story.Iwould like to see more.

nice!

I am a biker myself, I do not favour harleys, however the title fits the story very well. It truly is THIS bikers fantasy!

Some folks take themselves a bit too seriously, I reckon.

This was a really good and carefully written story. I enjoyed it and I thank you for it. It was definitely worth Five Stars!

more more more

Looks like I am the last to read this(judging from the dates of the last
comments) and I feel myself wanting more. If you aint dead yet GET TO IT!!!

more please

please continue this story. thank you.

Awesome story please continue

Great story I hope you add to it

Excellant as always !

Having read this wonderful tale several times it is untrusted to my favorites having earned 5 stars for each chapter.
I am sorry to have lost you for more than 10 years but hopefully you get to read our comments either here or in the great behind .
Thank you for your wonderful tales.

tx cracker

Too bad just got to you

Septuagenarian keeping up with some good minds giving me some good reads, too bad I didn´t run across you until recently...hope you´re still around to at least know that you´re still making a lot of people feel good. Thank you.