Natalie

great story

really good, loved the punch in the jaw especially

I Loved This

beautifully written and emoted...

Great Writing

I have to say.It was amazing that the Nice Guy finally wins one.

Nice

Very, very nice.

Romantic and funny, I enjoyed it a lot.

sweet story

talk about breeding yourself out of the gene pool! i guess that is why super helpful people are so rare!

WOW

Can't say enough about your stories. Please keep posting.

WOW

Can't say enough about your stories. Please keep posting.

Maybe a rewrite, but it's as good as the origional

I loved this story when I first read it, and I still love it!

Romance and a sense of humor

This Horny 'ol Sailor says thank you for a job well done. I loved the humor and the fact that it ended the way a good love story ought to end. Ronnie W.

Wonderful !

Very well written and loved the well placed humor!
I got to get me a dog and a girl like that!

I'm sitting here amidst tears AGAIN...

as this is the second time you've touched my soul with this wonderful story you wrote for me. And although the first version was beautiful - this one hugged me even tighter than before. Knowing this came first from your heart through your very talented mind and then your equally talented hand, I am having a very difficult time expressing myself {you would never think that could happen, would you? lol} I am just so deeply grateful for being blessed with you in my life, dear friend. I truly love you. Know this.

Loved it.. LOVED it

I loved it the very first time I read it... years ago.. and I don't love it any less now... thanks for reposting and refreshing my memory. and hey man.. KEEP EM COMING!!! ;-)

You know..

If Sancho was as intelligent as the dog, I'd marry him and skip Dulcinea.
On secoind thought, his breath sticks and he farts alot, but then again so does a dog.
I'm sure Dulcinea's farts don't stink, but I decline to find out...

Loved the story!

Man

Romance, what a wonderful catagory...

Just the hint of sex, a touch of humor and a smart dog to boot. I would have loved to have Rosie as a Mother-in-law.

I'm hoping to meet my 'Natalie' sometime in the near future.

Wonderfully written

Hey Kirk-man. Thanks for very cool story that got me rooting for the underdog. I always love a good fun little story that infuses realistic but quirky personalities. Throw in a bit of subtle romance, cool dialogue, and intriguing characters mixed with humor and you've got a great narrative. I've saved this as one of my favorites. I'd love to read similar genres to this one. A refreshing change from the typical romance stories.

I liked it

Very inspiring. I was laughing alot at the realism of it.

Very wonderful style :)

Loved him

Loved Jack! The only one in the story that had any sense!

Wonderful and sweet!

What a charming story in a fucked-up world. Well done!

I Read This In A rush

But this was so sweet. It has such a kind and warm voice. Like a friend you truly care for. So much heart. Please keep writing.....

Good Story!

This was one entertaining and enjoyable story. Another comment summed it up perfectly, 'a sweet story'. It is so nice to read a story about true love and it was very imaginative. I like stories that are different. Thank you for a wonderful story.

this was good

yes, a bit of a fairy tale, but believable. I think everyone's heard the saying no good deed goes unpunished. she stopped the good deed for her own reason, which was a good deed for him.

The best was Jack!