by Wildform22
The story started well, but then entered the territory of assholeness (It’s not enough to hurt her, you have to take unauthorized pics?), before ending into plain stupid (She was too tired to finish the blowjob, but then gave another full one, and then again rode him for some time? Be consistent, dude!).
Utterly stupid. We don't NEED you writers telling us this is an adult site, we KNOW that, so strike one! Strike two, childish writing, and strike three utterly inconsistent plot. 1*