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ZMP~ a mountain's tear drop

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by Jennifer C05/08/05

Great Work

Love your ZMP Poetry Art,
this was beautiful and Tranquil,
Lovely imagery I felt very
at peace after reading it.
Thank you.
~ J

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by Scott N. Leavitt05/08/05

**5**

WOW!!! An other GREAT poem!! Thankyou ZMA for a ZMP of what I asked you befor!!!

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by Anonymous05/08/05

pebble drops of tears

very good and you know i love your zmp, i will help a few of those mountain tear drops to the water now that i know that's what they want! S~

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by Wanton Vixxxen05/08/05

Enchanting tale...

in the tranquil setting of a zen atmosphere makes for the magic of this poem. Just to close My eyes and picture a stone as " a mountain teardrop" inspires Me so! Each stanza unfolded yet another beautiful vision, Art. I do believe this is one of your best ZMP pieces

Vixxx

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by Anonymous05/09/05

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Zen at its best. This poem has depth that I see rising in your works Art. I really see how the nature/human correspondence revolves in the work. Thank you for another wonderful reflection...
du lac~
mentioned in the Sunday on Monday reviews

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nice

great flow lovely words!
awesome as always!
kisses,
T

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by dcpoet4405/09/05

nice visuals....

are felt throughout the piece. i'd have to say that you saved the best for the last stanza as it is my favorite. nicely done art......don

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