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Nice work
Conratulations on the E.
~ J
nice
very nice poem. I like it. :)
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What a lovely way to start my reading.
I enjoyed this. :)
the unfolding
this poem unfolded like the tail of stars... really very lovely poem, the peacock did not seem to belong on the road until the feathers... thank you for sharing it with us
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Depth and intrigue move through this poem. I felt stillness and motion all in a breath.
thank you
du lac~
mentioned in the Sunday on Monday reviews
sometimes all I can do
is just release a contented sigh/ like now/
ahhhh
beautiful poem
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,500 poems.
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